Sunset had left her house on a winters evening late at night just for a simple walk. Not too much to ask right? Wrong. Her walk is cut short when she runs into the human world's Twilight Sparkle who insists they sit down and talk about what is happening with Sunset recently. Her sudden change in clothing, her constantly low and monotone voice, her tiredness and her distance her her friends recently. Twilight is scared for her girlfriend and shes going to find out why Sunset is like this. Even if it costs their realtionship.
Set in the EG universe but has traits of out side it so its kinda a crossover. Sunset x Sci-Twi.
Artwork is not mine I just cropped the background behind it.
Original image: http://twilite-sparkleplz.deviantart.com/art/The-Cycle-Repeats-504044506
Not a bad little story. Hope to see a sequel to this in the future.
7364339 Why thank you! The option is there so it is possible
Awesome as always!! You should make a sequal to this! And I love the Uncharted references. I LOVE that game!
7388538 why thank you :3 and I was actually planning a squeal type thing based off the auction from the 4th game
7390195 Haha!
You should do that! It sounds like a great idea.
My friend, you have gave me a reason to play Uncharted.
7441821 Ne way really?! Totally go for it it's such a good franchise and the 4th was just incredible!
7441867 Uh-huh, tho I kept cursing whenever I get stuck or I just lose.
7441885 Yeah I feel that but once you get through it y'all will feel so good about it!
Sunset is Nate? Okay.
7617311 Is that a bad thing?
7618001 No. I was actually surprised that you'd have Sunset become a treasure hunter after CHS. Yeah, I remember this scene because I played Uncharted 4 at a friend's house some time ago.
7618007 She's quite outgoing so I thought it would suit her nicely :)
When I looked at the cover art I thought that Sunset looked like Yuki Nagato from the Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya
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Anyone else or is it just me?
7624736 I can see it XD
This story is too short for it's own good. It feels like it's a single chapter in the middle of a better story. I liked it, but it suffers from the lack of length.
Also Twilight's revelation that Sunset is this other Daring Do type character would be a lot better, I think, if you connected it to an actual alias of Sunset's. The pronoun game just became confusing at that point.
What was really all her?
What thoughts?
Daring Do? Drake in this universe? Sunset?
Okay so not Daring Do must be talking about Sunset
Just was a little confusing, I got confused looked back to see what context I missed, gave up and read on found the context in the next few sentences and paragraphs. I think giving Sunset an alias and connecting the context to that name and later that name to Sunset would keep your structure but reduce the confusion, but I could be wrong.
7773165 Valid point. Honestly this was a bit rushed and I could of done a better job with specifics as you pointed out. I guess I tired to be all mysterious and cool but it didn't really work out
Sequel?????
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My other story, are you happy?, is a kind of sequel and I'm currently in the process of writing another part of this story!
Great thx's you are an amaazing writer I love all your story's hope the next part is available soon
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Awh thank you! 💖 Tell you what, once I finish and update the current chapter of Shadow in the Dark, I'll back onto the sequel of this story!
Thank you so much I just finished reading shadow in the dark amazing work
Great storyline, though since sci twi is in this it should have sci twi labeled instead of twilight