[THIS IS NOT A FLUTTERDASH STORY, THIS IS JUST A STORY ABOUT THEM BEING FRIENDS]
Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy have been friends since as long as they remember. They take some time after school to reflect on their many years together and the many more years they will spend.
Sex tag is for a few raunchy jokes and references.
Tragedy tag is for...well, read it and see.
Just a note, future stories I write will contain Fluttershy, so you can consider this one noncanon to anything.
FLUTTERSHY!! NOOOOOOO!!!!![youtube=http://m.youtube.com/watch?v=DgZIYdFmZqc]
That is one funky-looking cloud.
But I'm curious to see where this goes. It's a little short for my tastes, but I'm liking what I see so far. However, there are some points where you do more telling than showing, as well as a couple cases where you did not make a new paragraph for a different speaker.
This one, for example.
Rainbow felt like she had been hit by a bus.
Just like Fluttershy had been.
I know that was supposed to be sad, but I laughed so hard.
>> NaiadSagalotaOar Thanks for noticing that. I'll fix it next time I get to a public computer.
>> mutualism_is_nice Fun fact, that sentence just popped into my head one day, and the entire reason I wrote this story was just to use that sentence.
NOOOOO!!!!
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You... You are my hero for that.
What? Who's...who's Will?
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