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Cupcake Chaos


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Rainbow dash gets the surprise of her life when she finds out Gilda and Pinkie pie are engaged, but even more surprising is how excited everypony else is for the upcoming ceremony. Can Rainbow dash learn to cope with her jealousy and be the best mare her friend deserves? Can Gilda deal with all these crazy ponies without snapping? Can Spike find anyone to date him? Oh the delightful melodrama! The first time Ive ever written a fic. I'm gonna need lots of feedback on this one. (Please be gentle?)


Image thanks to Fim wiki for the background and on DA- Takua770 for the Rainbow dash image, and generalzoi's pony creator for pinkie pie and her base dress.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 58 )

Sorry but just not seeing ANY chance of pinkie and Gilda together EVER......just saying...3 stars

Still funny though:pinkiehappy:

LOL!

Pinkie Pie and Gilda engaged! :pinkiecrazy:

Personally I think the whole appeal of the pairing is how utterly, utterly (and exquisitely) crack it is.

And I'm glad to see that the author seems to be aware of that playing up the comedy as much as possible.

Very lol.gildaPie shipping?
:pinkiegasp::rainbowhuh::rainbowderp:

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Oddly enough I'm actually a bit surprised that I haven't seen this yet given that I've seen a number of people speculate on the possibility of it. No they're not a natural pair, but then look at the popularity of the Twixie ship. Or the way fans latch onto couplings filled with squabbling (namely AppleDash and Rarijack). Pairing up Gilda and Pinkie would be exactly in the same vein, but so much more rife with comic potential considering the parties involved. In some ways it's almost a "natural" crack-pairing.

Wow... I like it. Pinkie and Gilda is nice pair, thought, wild and fun. Pinkie can learn how to be more serious, Gilda - how to have fun :pinkiehappy:

Tracked and 5-star. Can't wait to read more!

The crack,it burns!:pinkiecrazy:
...and also the sadness.

Why do I love this pairing? 4 stars.

I wanted to do a pairing Ive absolutely never read in any other fic and I was surprised no one had tried this one. I looked everywhere to find it before I started writing. Nothing. Anywhere. I tried to think of any reason GildiePie would be weirder than Gilddash and I couldn't think of one. They do get into a nice pleasant fight in the next chapter but because its Pinkie Pie trying to make a sensible argument....well...... :pinkiecrazy:

Wow. That was good! :pinkiehappy:
One problem, "So whatcha need pinks?” There needs to be a comma, and Pinkies name needs to be capitalized :pinkiesmile:

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Thanks I fixed it. Im pretty crappy at grammar, so there may be quite a bit of these kinds of issues in chapter 3. :twilightsheepish:

OOOOO. Can't wait to read this and see where this is going.:twilightsmile:

Oh boy.....Gilda and Pinkie babysitting the 3 biggest hyper fillies in Ponyville, then 2 Rainbow Dashes plot to spy on the 2 love birds.

What can go wrong? lol Let the highjinks begin!:rainbowlaugh:

48740 You just jinxt it now nothing is gona go wrong cause you did forsee it... -.-

Next chapter coming either tonight or tomorrow afternoon :heart:

"Complicated. But I like it"

I can just imagine Spike being completely serious when saying that :rainbowlaugh:

Also, Dash being utterly clueless when Twilight threw herself at her, cracked me up. Awesome story :pinkiehappy:

This is fucking hilarious, added with gusto.

Thanks, glad you guys like it. :twilightsmile:

I am truly and genuinely torn by this story...

...I can't decide what's more friggin' hilarious, Dash being utterly clueless at Twilight utterly coming onto to her, or Pinkie's explanation of the birds'n'the bees along with that concluding line. :rainbowlaugh: Bravo, writer. Bravo.

(Does this mean that Twi misspoke when she said, "Celestia appreciation night?" :rainbowhuh: )

Nope Twi meant Celestia. If she cant have one rainbow haired mare she can enjoy spending the night thinking of another one while she... "studies" :raritywink:

I know the last line has been said before but... that's exactly what would happen and you know it lol

Well Cutie Mark Crusaders, who should we try and hook the most awesomestsauciestbestest pegasus up with next!?:unsuresweetie:
I know, Princess Luna! :scootangel:

:rainbowderp: Er, no. :rainbowhuh:

And then began the adventure of the Crusaders trying to pair poor Dashie up with quite literally everyone.

Cutie Mark Crusaders Dating Service oh boy here we go:derpyderp2::trollestia:

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

wow... just wow.
This is the most random thing ive ever read. GildaPie shipping... Hillarity ensued. I would 5 star this but ive feel I need to be harsher becuase there is a lot of wrongs in the writing, one of the worst cases being: ''She giggled as she licked the last bit of cloud off her fingers'' :pinkiegasp: Pinkie Pie has fingers? I did not know. :facehoof: Still giving this 4 stars :eeyup:

Finally done after a lot of annoyance and procrastination. Chapter 7 most likely going up tomorrow when I get home since that one just needs to be proofread. And yes the title is the same as a power puff girls episode. Lauren Faust bonus!

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Really? How is it possible no one yelled at me about this before!?!? This is why I said I need feedback guys, I have a horribly short attention span. I actually had to edit my newest chapter 3 times because I used the word hands a few times.

Fixed the error and made the word "hoof". Everyone, please let me know when I make these kinds of stupid errors. :facehoof:

If anyone is having trouble with mama G think of Ray's mother from "Everybody loves Raymond" If she had voice and looks of Dr. Girlfriend (Mrs.The monarch). :rainbowkiss:

For some reason I like this version of Spike. And in all this is pretty hilarious. :rainbowkiss:

I actually imagined her voice to sound like mrs. bighead...not sure why.

Not exactly happy with how you made the three guys. they DID make up with Rainbow, unlike Gilda.

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The way I though about it while I was writing was, although they may have apologized, they have been making fun of Rainbow Dash since she was a filly, unlike Gilda who used to be her best friend. Gilda's actions were because of jealousy, hurt pride, and embarrassment. Those three are just fickle acquaintances who only praise Dash if she's winning something and seem content to make fun of her otherwise. At least that's the way I see it.

I really want to read more about these two! Awesome writing!

Damn, this had to be one of the funniest stories I have read in a long time. The first chapter was a bit weird for me, but everything after flowed much better. The jokes were great and Spike was especially a good element for the story. Keep going author!

Yay new chapter! *awkward clap*
I really couldn't think of a better title than Party rock considering whats in it but if anyone thinks of a better title I'll gladly change it to yours. :applejackconfused:
Anywho, Enjoy guys! Only 2 chapters and a bonus left.

Also for people giving me thumbs down, can you give me feedback about it so I can, you know, improve the story and catch mistakes Ive missed? :trixieshiftleft:

I never considered liking Pinkie Pie and Gilda together but I'm so glad you finally put up another chapter of My Best Mare's Wedding! Thanks a ton!:raritywink:

Thank you guys. I'm glad you like it :heart:

bawhaaaaaa haahahahahahahahaaaa:rainbowlaugh:

now that sounds like a fun night:scootangel:

first chapters got me this is going to be a riot

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