This story is a sequel to For science
The continuation of Stella's and Twilight's Story. (read book one first)
We will take a look at Cadence's past and have some extra science as a bonus
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So this Twilonium is exactly like a magical hydrogen:lighter than air and highly explosive but with premium adds :It has the ability to enchanting,have nice color and anyone can produce it in the house.....Why it is fictional....WHY
Ps.Now I'm curious what else she will discovered,well this will be interesting ride,let's see that
And add to "Read it definitely" section :D
Perfect :D
Will you do mature version of this one too?
YEEEEESSSSS!!!!!
Now Stella can make bombs soon!!!
Don't mess with Twilight when Stella is with her. She has Science!!! And ......oh...oh my GAWD!!! SHE CAN MAKE AN EXPLODING FLANETHROWER!!!! U SCREWED CELLY!!!
Watch out Pinkie and Dash and...Luna!!! We have a new prankster of Equestria....and she is badass!
7978752 well, it is MUCH more expensive than hydrogen, more like nitroglycerin. She used like a shot glass of it and bye bye lab.
if everyone could make something like this at home
7978926 thank you
7979001 it's not planned right now. Depends on how the story goes... if something explicit happens I want to see in detail myself... I may write it.
7979248 armed and ready
It is always fun to have enough firepower to blow up Canterlot... if necessary
Just logged on and saw this... 2 thoughts appeared in my mind one was wait what? then a even bigger voice yelled OMG yes!!!!!!!
SO Cadance was raped, nearly killed and maybe lost a part of her memories because of that and the transformation? I just found out about the story.
HHhhmmmm I see you characters are still not affraid to get totally horny in each others presence, however I still have no problem with it.
My only thoughts where, why doesn't she have herself enough under control to wait till Stellar is gone?
I liked it when you have done it a few times, but like I said last time, maybe it would be a nice change if not everyone would continue to have those overdone moments. However I want you to continue with it a few time, like for Twilight for once since she has this as some kind of running gag. (Du warst der der Deutsch mit mir gelaber hat richtig? ich bring das manchmal ducheinander.)
Ich würde deren perverse Momente in diesem Sequel etwas seltner einstreuen, bei Twilight ist das schon so ein wiederkehrender Witz, Pinkie scheint auch okay zu sein so, bei Applejack könnte ich mir alledings vorstellen das die nachdem die nun ne Freundin hat sich etwas unter Kontrolle kriegt und Rainbow ist nunja unser Euter liebendes Pegasus. Ich hab nur das Gefühl es würde besser aussehen und wirken wenn du diesmal nicht ganz die Überdosis einstreust, ich hätte jetzt zum Beispiel gedacht das die vielleicht auch mal warten bis einer weggeht bevor die sich unbedingt an entsprechende Tätigkeiten begeben.
Wenn ich erlich bin muss ich zugeben das ich auch glaube Lyra reagiert so und Bon Bon würde sich eher zurückhalten können.
Daführ das ich Deutsch und Englisch geschrieben habe werde ich besser darin meine Kommentare auf den Punkt zu bringen
Wouldn't that somehow hurt a bit to put that hand on her?
My random thoughts demand to have them adopt a filly at some point or even a colt, yes this time I would even be okay with a colt, them having to give him the talk would fit in with the other akward moments.
This is really good so far, but I wish I would wait a bit longer befor reading this stuff, I know that I react different when being sleepy or just waking up. However like I said the story was good so far.
7979385 I'm happy you're happy
7979991
Tonight I'll give them a good read working at the moment
7979836 short answer: no
7979856 I expect it won't happen often in book two, this is more the exception to the rule. But you know I not really sure how the story will develop.
Ich erwarte das es nicht oft im zweiten Buch passieren wird, das war eher die Ausnahme. Aber du weißt das sich die Geschichte manchmal anders entwickelt als ich es erwarte.
7979866 No, one of the elements of the wooden fitting can fold to the side and they all are padded. It's nice of you to worry about her. Maybe I make it clearer in the chapter what I imagine.
7979873 your free to read it again later
We need Moon Dancer join in the group since she is practically Twilight's clone.
7979866 adoption could always be a possibility, depending om how the story goes.
7980019 since I already messed up the timeline it would be a possibility.
The science here is wrong. The oxygen tube would actually appear to have 8 times the amount of the hydrogen tube because of their relative molar masses.
7982212 molar mass is not the same as density. I watched videos of the experiment and it was about 2:1. Have you seen different?
7982212 orig04.deviantart.net/8d52/f/2017/057/b/d/electro_by_znegil-db0jnyp.jpg
That's what I saw. Just the molar mass doesn't say much about it's density as a gas. I don´t want to go into to much detail in the story because I don´t want to bore people, just telling them what would be seen.
7979272 Now I feel torn between choice: relaxed that it doesn't exist here and yet I desire this even more
also question: if Stella will use different type of juice: the final product will be exactly the same or different?(because magic/magical dimension)
I look forward to see what the future holds and as their experiments (I hope that more explosions and magical substances/chemical compounds and elements)
It will be interesting to see how Celestia reacts to their discovery,I can't wait to see next chapter.
7985192 It's an interesting thought that it could depend on this kind of juice and other juices would produce different results, but I think it is just passive to help in the experiment. The amount of possibilities would be to big if it would depend of kind of juice, concentration, acid content...
I'm in the middle of writing the Celestia chapter, they are just standing before her door right now.
7979285 Was the pun intended or not. 'Cause I thought it quite hilarious. Armed *snicker*
Also yay for Stella now being able to make weapons of mass destruction. For when friendship and magic just aren't enough anymore. When will she introduce them to firearms and kevlar wests? The Royal Guard definitely need an upgrade in gear. Also making more of a superpower than it already is.
My biggest concern right now is for Cadence. We now know she was once human. That can easily be a big panic. Or maybe not. I hope things still work out in the end.
Wow, ponies aren't shy about their sexuality's.
7986071 "armed" wasn't intended, but it is funny
7987495 Maybe that's what you get when you walk around naked all the time and see each others private parts anyway.
7986706 I think it's funny what you think you "know"
Things might not be what you think.
I thought about going this route, but things didn't add up.
We know Nightshade visited the human world at least two hundred years ago, we know Cadence ages normally like other ponies.
Celestia will give us a bit more inside information soon.
ohhhhh sun buts hidin shit
7988883 crud crud crud, cliffhanger alert...
This is like thos emoments in some disney movie, where you have to decide for yourself if it is the right thing to make them feel like they are a part of this world/family by not telling them anything, or if you tell them right away.
Like always a part of me understands Celestia and a part of me demands she should have told Cadance earlier about it
However I'm on Celestias side this time, she probably had no way to help her anyway at least I hope that. I mean if she could have helped her then I would want to see Cadance actually getting angry with her and Celestia having to apologize, but I expect Cadance to forgive her pretty fast and I don't need a big drama.
Yes while I am on Celestias side I would still like to see an apologize from Celestia, in most chases the author would just haver her talk about it.
In den meisten Fällen würden andere Celestia, dass ganze nur trocken rüber bringen lassen mit einer Tonlage die andeuten würde "beschwer dich und ich mach dich fertig. Naja ist vielleicht übertrieben aber selbst wenn mann es nachvollziehen kann bekomme ich nie das Gefühl, dass die Charactere von Celestia auch mal ne Entschuldigung einfordern für große oder kleine Fehler oder das Celestia sich so benimmt als täte es ihr leid.
Oh achja nettes Kapitel konnte mich über nichts beschweren, dies ist tatsächlich nur eine Meinungsäußerung/ analyse.
7988907 cliffhangers are so nice for the end of chapters
7989001 I don't see Celestia as a character that uses her position of power to suppress criticism for a mistake she made. Even if she did something with good intentions, she would always apologize if she hurt someone.
Ich denke nicht das Tia jemals ihre Macht einsetzen würde um Kritik an ihren Fehlern zu unterdrücken. Sie würde sich stehts entschuldigen wenn sie jemand verletzt hat, selbst wenn sie gute Absichten hatte.
7989973 no they aren't because then a author leaves the story there permanently and no sequel ever happens... it is quite depressing
and now I'm wining again aren't I ...
7990248 okay, that's bad. But I couldn't leave something just unfinished, that would really both...
7990377 yes but there is a reason I have 500 stories in tracking, it's because they only get updated every once in a great while, now as for how I keep 500+ plotlines running through my mind simultaneously is a thing I don't even know.
7990448 wow! That's a lot. You don't have to worry about that for my stories, I try to stick to my plan of once a week and usually write more than that. I feel bad if leave my readers without a new chapter for to long, because I feel like letting them down.
7991088 thank you very much
7989991 Ich meinte auch vermutlich das ich das woanders oft so sehe und ich denke mal dass ich hoffte dies würde hier nicht so sein. Dein Kommentar lässt vermuten das dies auch nicht passieren wird.
I probably meant that I see if in other stories and I hoped that it doesn't happened in this one.
Your coments it telling me that it probably won't happen.
I really like it it turned out better than I thought it would last time, actually this is probably exactly what I wanted. Maybe you should think of a real name for Cadance and I think Twilights Mother and Stella still needs to embrass her
7998414 Her name could be one thing they could find entering the tower. But I think Celestia would have found it back then if there were any clues.
7998480 I think I forgot a bit what they said about Cadance past, because I think they thought she maybe was a Human and now it looked a bit like they where Ponys and that they tried to go to the Human world or something.
Not sure why I had that idea.
well I am still working threw the story but even my old mind can guess what this new gas is.
hint it is not a gas at all. it is pure. no spoilers from me.
hum ok so when you turn -------- in to gas it explodes interesting.
ok now this is getting super interesting.