Midnight has Always been apart a Twilight sparkle.
Sunset needs Twilight help, in defeating Gloriosa.
She tells Twilight that she's not Midnight sparkle.
Midnight.... has a different saying in this.
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Midnight has Always been apart a Twilight sparkle.
Sunset needs Twilight help, in defeating Gloriosa.
She tells Twilight that she's not Midnight sparkle.
Midnight.... has a different saying in this.
Excellent story.
It was kinda sad tho.
The story isn't bad, I'm interested to see where it goes. Though I think that the reason your getting so many thumbs down is the spacing issues with paragraphs. If you uploaded it from Google docs, its been having difficulty with that. Try copy and pasting it next time. Best of luck!
And here is where demon Shimmer starts making her move, asking her freedom for the power to stop midnight/Twilight sparkle.
*YOU'RE
Twilight
“And how do I know that you're not lying to me?!”
“Sunset, just what in the world *happened in there?!”
Now where have I heard that before? =)