Sonata's Ocean

It's been a while since the Battle of the Bands robbed them of their magic, but the sirens have been making do. They live mundane lives, work mundane jobs, and live in a pretty mundane apartment. Life isn't good, but it's good enough.

A wayward bit of magic may be Sonata's ticket out. But when magic is involved, nothing is ever so simple.

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Low Tide · 29th Sep 2017 · 2,035 words
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Flood Tide · 29th Sep 2017 · 3,005 words
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High Tide · 29th Sep 2017 · 3,221 words
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Ebb Tide · 29th Sep 2017 · 465 words
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Beeooow

Beeooow #1 · Sep 29th, 2017 · 2 · · Ebb Tide ·

that was pretty good

MrAskAPirate

MrAskAPirate #2 · Sep 29th, 2017 · · · Ebb Tide ·

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I'm not even going to crack a joke about it, and coming from me that's a pretty big deal.
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Seether00

Seether00 #3 · Sep 29th, 2017 · · · High Tide ·

NebulaNyx

NebulaNyx #4 · Oct 1st, 2017 · · · Low Tide ·

I have to say, so dar I am impresed. This is really interesting.

NebulaNyx

NebulaNyx #5 · Oct 1st, 2017 · · · Flood Tide ·

Now THIS is interesting.

NebulaNyx

NebulaNyx #6 · Oct 1st, 2017 · · · High Tide ·

....woah.

NebulaNyx

NebulaNyx #7 · Oct 1st, 2017 · · · Ebb Tide ·

That was an awesome story. Very well done.

gapty

gapty #8 · Sep 26th, 2022 · · · Ebb Tide ·

A nice and heartwarming story. I especially like how that is something that could have been made in the show. Sonata's feelings were done well and the portrayel of her sisters were also good, the end where they played an important part in holding her down was also executed well.

Maybe the beginning was a bit too mysterious, or rather left a bit too many questions open, but at the same time it's just my feeling I had and me trying to connect the opening scene too soon, as looking back after finishing it it all fits together and I assumed a bit too much from the start. Just something I noticed, write it off as me being too slow or too fast

But yeah, as I said, a good Dazzling fic with amazing portrayel of the Dazzlings and a nice plot fitting for the EqG

Anonimate

Anonimate #9 · January 21st · · · High Tide ·

Anonimate

Anonimate #10 · January 21st · · · Ebb Tide ·

This history was amazing.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #11 · Yesterday · · · Low Tide ·

Sonata stretched her arms out, yawned, and tried her best to remember what Moustache’s name was. It was hard to tell her two bosses apart; the only identifying features between the two were the first’s moustache and the pins on their lapels, and that didn’t make it any easier to match names to their faces.

Out of all the people she's working for, it just had to be the Flim Flam brothers...

Sonata looked again to the door to the back room. Then, quickly but with care not to damage it, she slipped the necklace into her pocket.

Of course she does.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #12 · 13 hours ago · · · Flood Tide ·

“Your position is no longer available,” Bare Lip said. “You will be receiving your last paycheck in the mail, of course.”

Which is your way of telling her she's fired...

But Adagio wasn’t paying any attention to her. “This is…”

Wait, does she know what it is!?

“Aria… She had Equestrian magic!”

Why am I not surprised the necklace is an artifact from Equestria.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #13 · 3 hours ago · · · High Tide ·

“I have no idea!” Adagio said. “But she got it from somewhere! There might be more!”

She got it from the shop owned by the Flim. Flam brothers...

Sunset was worried they’d end up sliding off the road, especially at the speeds they were going. Aria, however, was proving herself an incredibly competent driver. She’d insisted on taking the wheel; Fluttershy, being Fluttershy, hadn’t needed much convincing before she’d handed over the keys. Adagio and the rest of the girls had crammed themselves into the back.

Must be cramped back there.

A pair of red brake lights appeared on the road ahead of them. Aria overtook at speed, the other car honking at them as they passed it.

Thx Aria, you nearly got them into an accident.

“Move!” she yelled, jumping to one side and tackling Adagio. They hit the ground just as the water that had been under her—and the rest of the girls—erupted into the air, a massive geyser that must have risen two stories, at least. Fluttershy’s van was sent skidding backwards on its back bumper, nearly flipping end-over-end as its front caught the burst.

I hope she has car insurance.

“Great job, you two” Applejack said. Rarity and Twilight nodded, their arms outstretched and their eyes narrowed in focus. Gently, they drifted back to the ground, the shield dissipating one facet at a time. Aria, meanwhile, was just standing up, Adagio following her.

two!" Applejack said.*

“No,” Sonata said. “I’m fixing one.” She brought both arms up, over her head.

No your no!!!

“Oh yeah? Did you think that you could just hop through that portal and waltz your way back home? Ponies would take one look at whatever you come out of that mirror as, and they’d start attacking! Did you think you could fight off the entire population of Equestria by yourself? We don’t even know where the mirror comes out anymore! For all you know, it dumps you right in the middle of Tartarus! Not much water for you to throw around there!

Technically it's in Princess Twilight's castle.

With a burst of harmonious magic, a rainbow of light rose high into the sky, parting the clouds as it passed through them and bathing the sky in colour. Aria, Adagio, and Sonata held each other tighter as it came crashing down around them.

Guess the girls did it afterall.

ScisetShimmerEvan

ScisetShimmerEvan #14 · 3 hours ago · · · Ebb Tide ·

“Adagio.”

Of course.

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