Brush your teeth, comb your mane, go to bed. It's not that hard, but every night Starswirl risks his life to make sure that his two charges get these steps done.
Warning; Diabetes.
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God, that brave, brave stallion. We salute you, Star Swirl!
Seriously, that was adorable.
Guess I should take my insulin shot, then.
D'awwwww.
This was just too adorable!
Keep talking.
Aww, that diabetes warning was accurate. This was so cute!
So cute
" Warning; Diabetes. " HAHA jokes on you sir I was born Diabetic. Good fuzzy story though, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Two "of"s, there,
now held itself fast
the fortress
Get what you're going for, but you either need to put the "rawr" in quotation marks/italics or use "roar", since it's accepted as both a noun and an onomatopoeia.
Um, ignoring that airtight does not necessarily mean soundproof, it seems to me that putting a small child in an airtight container is not a sensible thing to do, alicorn or no.
Cute story overall. Sorry if I'm nitpicking, these are just things I noticed, and I did overall like the story.
This is awesome and adorable! The feels are amazing as well! Great job! :3
Good mix of funny, heartwarming and heartbreaking at the end.
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