HERMES – MISSION DAY 138
The image of Mitch Henderson appeared on all the workstations on the bridge for the second time in about eight minutes.
“Mitch Henderson here,” he said. “Commander Lewis, we’ve already taken into account your arguments about the durability of Hermes and the superiority of the pictures you’re taking over anything the satellites can perform. And believe me when I say this was a very hard decision to take. But Mr. Sanders and Dr. Kapoor have decided that the ongoing risk to Hermes is no longer worth the images you’re getting.”
The flight director took a deep breath and added, “And I have to say I agree fully with this decision. It might be different if we could use Hermes and the MAV as a combined communications platform, but yesterday’s experiment shows that it just won’t work. The range is too great, and either Watney’s rover can’t receive or he’s turned the radio off to save power. Either way, we feel further monitoring of Acidalia can be conducted adequately by the survey satellites, and that top priority is now bringing you and Hermes home.”
Mitch leaned into the camera for this part. “I fully agree with you that an astronaut’s whole career is about risk. And I admire your willingness to continue to risk your lives for Watney and his guests. But you’re also risking Hermes, and the best chance we have for rescuing Watney requires Hermes intact, functional, and back in Earth orbit for refit. The sooner we do that, the better prepared we’ll be to rescue Watney.
“That’s not saying that you’re unimportant. We’re bringing you back because your lives are our top priority. But if we put Watney’s life ahead of yours, we’d still make the same decision. That’s what I’m saying.”
Mitch took a deep breath and leaned back. “At the top of the hour Houston time we’ll be transmitting the trajectory programs for the two orbital burns required to raise Hermes back to a safe circular orbit,” he said. “After that you’ll set the MAV to satellite mode and deploy it, and then begin your Earth injection orbit burn, which we’ll send you once you acknowledge receipt of the orbit adjustment programs. Charlie will be back in the CAPCOM seat for those.
“We know you want to help, but facts are facts. You can’t get back down to Watney. Watney can’t get back up to you. The Ares IV MAV won’t make enough fuel for even the missed orbit emergency scenario until at least Sol 443, and Watney can’t reach it right now anyway. And you can’t talk to Watney. You’ve done what you can. It’s time to come home.”
Mitch’s lips moved for a second or two longer, as if he wanted to say something else, but all that came out in the end was, “Henderson out.”
The video ended.
Vogel sighed and leaned back in his seat. “So,” he said, “we tried.” He hadn’t expected Lewis’s protest to change NASA’s decision, but he’d been silently impressed at how much passion she’d put into her message while remaining quiet, clinical and professional in her speech. Vogel approved; it was almost German.
And, truth be told, he wanted to stay longer himself… if only… if only…
“There should be something we can do,” Johannsen murmured.
“You know there isn’t,” Martinez said, slapping the armrest of his flight seat. “We’re separated just as much as the rich man from Lazarus.”
“It bought us one more pass,” Lewis said at last. “Cameras ready?”
“Video camera all green,” Johannsen said.
“Stills camera ready,” Vogel said.
“Closest pass in seven minutes… mark,” Martinez reported.
“Focus on the crash site,” Lewis said. “Mark was out there yesterday. That’s our best chance to find him… and say goodbye.”
“Not goodbye,” Vogel said, and to his own surprise his normally soft voice came out with a harder edge than he’d intended. He forced himself to relax as he added, “Say auf Wiedersehen. Until next we meet.”
AMICITAS FLIGHT THREE – MISSION DAY 10
ARES III SOL 14
“You know,” Fireball admitted to his copilot for the day, “I never thought I’d be using this seat again.”
Through a lot of digging and a truly idiotic display of unicorn stubbornness, what was left of Amicitas had been pulled from the Martian surface the previous day. For a wonder the landing gear had been mostly intact, with only one tire requiring an emergency repair. Cranking the gear down had taken the whole morning, with Fireball helping lift one corner of the ship after another while the alien stink-ape and Dragonfly worked the manual cranks.
Even with Starlight Glimmer trying to help lift again with her telekinesis (again? As if yesterday hadn’t been enough), there was still a little charge left in the mana battery, so Dragonfly had reinstalled it into the ship. The mana-to-electric converter still worked, but they’d shut down absolutely every system on the ship, working or not, to spare power for the one system they didn’t shut off: the steering system for the front landing gear.
Now they crawled along behind the ape’s little scooty-car. To be fair, the rover was towing something so many times its own weight that even Fireball, for all his contempt for the alien, was almost impressed. Almost. Actual impressedness failed because, apparently, the combined car and spaceship couldn’t move any faster than Crackle after she ran her head into a stalagmite… again.
Something plugged Fireball’s sinuses, and he mustered up a tiny bit of flame to clear them out. Am I actually missing Crackle? he asked himself. This place is getting to me.
“What’s wrong?” Dragonfly asked from the copilot position.
“Nothing,” Fireball lied. “Just the scenery reminds me of home. Nothing important.”
“Not me,” Dragonfly said. “The Badlands are desert, but at least it’s an indifferent desert. This place actively hates us.”
“You’re imagining things,” Fireball grumbled.
“I don’t know,” Dragonfly said, the changeling never taking her eyes off the rover ahead of and below them. “The queen always says that when she’s in orbit she can feel something that loves her unconditionally. I never got that. But here I can feel this… this…” The changeling’s face scrunched in concentration. “I guess it’s like a whisper, or maybe a really thin haze of pure hate. We don’t belong here. We aren’t wanted.”
“That suits me fine,” Fireball said. “I don’t like this place very much either, and I’m leaving first chance we get.”
“I wonder if Bucephalous is like this?” Dragonfly muttered.
“But what I was saying,” Fireball said, not liking the touchy-feely direction Dragonfly wanted to go with the conversation, “was this looks like a lot of the dragon lands. It just needs a couple more cliffs and some volcanoes, and some breathable air, and it’d be just like home.”
“Amicitas, Starlight Glimmer.” The suit communications systems, being totally magical, wouldn’t talk to the alien’s electronics, but suit to suit communications among Amicitas’s crew functioned perfectly. “Rock ahead on the right side. Mark’s steering left.”
“Amicitas copies steer left,” Fireball replied, nudging the flight stick. The sudden sound of the motors that rotated the front landing gear echoed through the otherwise silent ship.
“While I’m on,” Starlight added, “suit battery check. Forty percent here.”
Fireball checked his. “Fifty-two percent.”
“Thir… that can’t be right!” Dragonfly tapped her own visor, but the projected numbers didn’t change. “Thirty-one percent here, Starlight.”
“Roger. I’ll tell Mark we need to abort the tow and return to his base in one hour.”
“Starlight, how much farther is it?” Fireball asked.
“I can’t read Mark’s controls yet. At a guess, we’re a little more than halfway there. Straighten wheels.”
“Straightening wheels,” Fireball reported.
“Thirty-one percent,” Dragonfly muttered. “And I’ve been doing the least work of the three of us.”
“Yeah, what’s up with that?” Fireball chuckled. “Got the munchies for juice instead of love?”
“Don’t laugh,” Dragonfly said. “To us changelings it’s one and the same thing. And it’s not like I get much of a snack off of you.”
Fireball laughed anyway. “So why do you keep hanging around me anyway?” he asked. “If you’re not playing with that ape, it seems like you’re my shadow.”
“I spend time with everyling,” Dragonfly replied. “But you don’t. You keep your distance from everyone.”
“Yeah, I do,” Fireball grumbled, “I don’t particularly like any of you. I think you’re all nuts.”
“Even the alien?”
“Especially the alien. No dragon would keep giving his limited food to strangers.”
“He is kinda pony-like, isn’t he?” Dragonfly said.
Fireball thought about this. The alien smiled a lot, he kept trying to talk to people who didn’t understand him, he didn’t give a toss about gems (and that, in Fireball’s book, was pure insanity), and he seemed to enjoy tinkering with broken things and playing in mud. “Now that you say it,” he said, “I can kinda see it, yeah.”
“Crazy like the rest of ‘em.”
“Yeah, he is.”
“And we non-ponies gotta stick together.”
Now that Fireball wasn’t necessarily on-board with. “Is that why you keep bothering me?” he asked.
“Mm,” Dragonfly hummed, and her suit’s thruster pack shook as her wings vibrated unconsciously under her suit. “It’s more that you look lonely, and out of all of us, you dislike me the least.”
“Well… um, yeah.” Darn it. The bug had steered the conversation into downtown Feelingsville anyway. “I owe you. I owe you big time.” He smirked a bit and added, “I might even actually like you if you weren’t crazier than all the ponies put together.”
“I resemble that- oh, no,” Dragonfly moaned. “Not another bucking one.”
In front of the rover another shallow gully stretched across their path.
“Starlight, Amicitas,” Fireball said, “applying brakes.”
“Thanks, Amicitas,” Starlight said. “You know the drill.”
“Yeah, I know,” Fireball grumbled. “We’ve only done it three times today. Ohhh, my back.” As the ship went from crawling speed to dead stop behind the rover, he added, “Whose bright idea was it to make the landing wheels on this thing so bucking small?”
“Pony ideas,” Dragonfly hissed as she shut off the power.
LOG ENTRY – SOL 15
I think that might have been the worst three days of my life.
It took three days of incredible hard work and concentration, but we finally got the alien ship back to the Hab. The morning of Sol 13, I didn’t think we could do it. The morning of Sol 14, I could see how we were going to do it. And by the time we got back to the Hab, I was wondering why we were doing it.
And let me be plain, what we accomplished was a miracle. Only the alien obsession with making their ship as unbreakable as possible and damn the weight kept the landing gear intact and deployable. Even so, without Macho Dragon and Starlight, we’d still be shoveling dirt and rocks with our hands. (Yes, hands. I have a couple of rock and soil sampling tools, but they aren’t built for moving large amounts of material. For removing loose debris, hands turned out to be faster.)
First… I should probably treat Fireball with more respect. He is so much stronger than he looks. I don’t even want to think about how many tons that ship weighs, but time and again he was able to pick up the nose or one fin just high enough for long enough for someone else to wedge a rock underneath or crank down those landing gear. If he offers to arm-wrestle me, I’m going to pretend I sprained my wrist. I just hope he doesn’t start demanding my lunch money. I can’t take that kind of wedgie.
And then there’s Starlight, my little psychic horsie genius. I found out during this trip that I’ve been spending a week and more living with Yoda and Captain Caveman wearing a two-man horse costume.
On Sol 13 we’d spent half our EVA time shoveling rubble and getting nowhere when Starlight hauls out one of those boxes salvaged from their ship and says the alien equivalent of, “Hold my haybale, I got this.” And then she lights up her psychic power and picks up that huge ship just like Luke’s X-Wing, I shit you not.
And then, just as the ship is in the air and turning its nose our way, the sparkly light flickers, and I can just hear Captain Caveman saying, “unga-bunga- magic power give out,” and the ship drops at a glorious slo-mo 3.7 meters per second per second right back onto the dirt. (You want to know how loud a sound has to be for you to hear it in the thin Martian atmosphere? That loud.) And then we carry her back to the rover and drive back to the Hab to let her sleep it off.
And then she got to do it again, and again, and again, and so did Fireball, all the way back to the Hab. It’s only ten kilometers, but it ended up taking us most of two sols.
Why, you ask? First, because I couldn’t use the rover’s built-in towhook. The towhook assembly is specifically designed so the two rovers can link together. In addition to mechanical clamps it includes power cords and air hoses so they can share electricity and life support. It was designed that way in case one rover broke down on an EVA. But the practical upshot is that there’s a lot of things there designed to withstand the kind of forces produced by towing one rover’s mass across the Martian surface.
At a very rough guess, the alien ship weighs anywhere between twelve and twenty times as much as one rover. So after about ten seconds of careful and deliberate consideration I said “fuck it” and decided to tie the tow ropes directly to the rover’s frame.
Now, rope of the kind you would buy at your local hardware store was not considered a mission-critical supply by NASA’s mission planners, an oversight I hope you historians of the future will correct for future interplanetary missions. I didn’t have any.
But I did have a lot of power cable of various lengths as redundant replacements for practically everything, from solar panels to field equipment to Hab systems. I was going to braid them together for strength and use them to tow the ship, but it turned out I didn’t need to. The aliens apparently had emergency parachutes as a fail-safe. I think the ones they used during landing automatically detached and blew away during the storm. But they were so crazy-prepared that they actually had duplicate parachutes on board the ship so the chutes could be re-packed for future use! Even NASA doesn’t go that far.
That gave me all the rope I needed, though it’s really weird rope. The substance it’s made out of feels all rubbery. It kind of looks like rubber too- black with ugly green streaks running through it. But it doesn’t get brittle like rubber would in the dry, freezing Martian environment, and it was plenty strong once I found tie-off points inside the front landing gear well.
But let’s face it, it was still rope and not a proper trailer hitch, and the only thing securing rover and ship together was some knots based on what I remembered from Boy Scouts and astronaut survival training. No way I could risk top speed in that.
So, that was the first problem. The second problem? Power. I’m lucky we’re in Acidalia Planitia, which is mostly flat. If we’d had any serious long upgrades to navigate- or worse yet, downgrades- it would have been game over. The rover’s four wheels each have their own electric motors that put out incredible torque, but they were working to overcome absurd amounts of inertia. And inertia is a constant. Earth gravity or Mars gravity, doesn’t matter, it’s the same either place.
So I spun the wheels a lot until I kind of learned just how to feather the accelerator. And since we couldn’t rely on the alien ship’s brakes to be reliable, once we got started at all, we didn’t dare move more than about one kilometer an hour.
Which brings us to the third problem: wheels. The rover is a big, jacked-up vehicle with a high ground clearance and independent suspension that enables it to drive across or even over some pretty large rocks without trouble. The wheels are 1.3 meters tall each.
The alien ship’s landing gear, on the other hand, are about half that- smaller than the tires you’d see on an eighteen-wheeler, and way smaller than the tires on a jet liner or the old Space Shuttle. And although the rear landing gear were just barely long enough to allow the wheels to drop out, the front landing gear is long and spindly by comparison, and I don’t care what kind of unobtanium they use to build their ship, hitting even a small rock square with that would ruin your day.
Thankfully, somehow or other, the dragon and the bug were able to get their ship’s steering working, which made dodging rocks easier. But it also meant I couldn’t go very fast, because I had to steer around rocks I normally wouldn’t give a second thought about to keep the ship on flat, solid ground.
And that brings us to the last, and worst, problem: the surface.
From a distance Acidalia looks flat as a pancake. It’s one of the least cratered regions of Mars. We specifically landed here not far from Mawrth Valles because it’s part of an ancient alluvial fan, where runoff from Arabia Terra flowed into what was once Mars’s biggest ocean and deposited all sorts of sediments.
But the thing is, that ocean dried up when Mars froze. And just like you see pictures of cracked soil like in all the news coverage of the Second Dust Bowl, when Acidalia dried up it cracked too… on a huge scale. So today the surface is large sections of almost perfectly flat ground (save for a crater or two and the resulting ejecta) broken up by broad but (thankfully) shallow ravines. The banks are about a meter tall on average, and the exposed soil is really crumbly. That surprised me, considering how solid the surface is under the top layer of loose dust and sand, but then I wasn’t the mission geologist. Lewis was.
The rover alone can handle those gullies without even slowing down. (25 kilometers per hour top speed, remember? I could pedal a dirt bike faster than the rover.) But towing the alien ship? Not a chance in Hell.
We crossed ten of the things between the Hab and Site Epsilon, and without Super Lizard and Captain Caveyoda the first one would have been the last. Every time we had to stop, carefully plan the descent into the ravine to keep the alien ship from rolling over, tow it as close as we could to the other bank, untie the rover, run the rover up the far bank, and retie the rover. And then, with Fireball pushing from behind and Starlight using the Force to lift the ship’s nose until the front landing gear cleared the rim, we hauled the thing up through all that loose, wheel-grabbing soil. Then we’d carry our little unicorn heroine back to the rover to recover and spend another hour or so creeping along the Martian surface to the next gully, at which point we started all over again.
We didn’t even consider doing it all in one go. We came back to the Hab every night to recharge the rover and the EVA suits, not to mention us. We really needed it. Thank God it’s over. Now, instead of driving the rover for half an hour to reach the alien ship, we can walk just past the solar farm to the north- three minutes of EVA at most.
Starlight’s in her bunk now, and Spitfire looks like she’s considering tying her to it. I don’t think that would slow her down much. Between lifts she rode with me in the rover. She didn’t use her mind-meld on me at all the last three days- probably saving herself for all the lifting- but she smuggled a whiteboard and marker onto the rover on Sol 14 for communication.
The good thing about driving at one kilometer per hour on Mars is, you’re highly unlikely to hit a dog or something when you aren’t paying attention to the road. So when Starlight and I weren’t reinventing hieroglyphs, we began teaching each other math.
That’s where things get really weird. Because not only do the aliens have Earth food, they have Earth numbers.
Well, close enough, anyway. Their 2 and 3 are slightly different, using sharp angles instead of curves. But it’s still a base-10 counting system using recognizably Indo-Arabic numerals. Their basic mathematical operators are the same. We had to get into calculus before some of the symbols became different, and even then they have some close variation on the Greek alphabet. She recognized most of what I was doing and jumped ahead of me a lot.
It didn’t work the other way. She threw several things at me that I didn’t recognize and still don’t. Apparently they were advanced enough concepts that explaining them through simple pictures wasn’t going to work, because every time we hit that point Starlight would move on to something else.
I took a photo of the last board full of math. Half of it is a circle surrounding a seven-pointed star. It looks like something you’d use to summon a demon with, if you were willing to sell your soul for an A in trigonometry. Instead of runes it’s full of equations using symbols only half of which are even vaguely familiar with me. However many years it is before you find this log, o intrepid reader, I suspect it’ll be at least that long again before anybody on Earth understands this.
But that’s all over with. That alien ship is parked on its wheels with a nice adorable landing ladder deployed from under its airlock doors just a short walk away, all the better to eventually raid it for spare parts. The rover is hooked up to Hab power to recharge. And I’m sitting down to my first full meal pack in days because, Goddamn it, I’ve earned it.
Dragonfly still hasn’t eaten a full meal pack of any kind since we’ve been here. I offered her a share of this meal pack, but she waved a hoof no, and then thanked me anyway with a hug. It was so cute, in a nightmare-from-hell-wants-cuddles way, that it left me weak in the knees.
But what’s her deal? Is it guilt? I mean, sure she didn’t perform miracles like her unicorn and dragon buddies, but she worked at least as hard as I did. I really need to ask Starlight about that.
But first food and bed. I’m hungry and I’m really, really tired. I think tomorrow I’ll take it easy and do something fun.
Playing in the dirt comes to mind.
It has occurred to me that should Equis plants get loose on Earth, it would only be a century or two before we have our own magic field. It'd be weaker than Equis, due to dilution with Earth native plants, but certainly something to worry about ecologically.
Nice try, Dragonfly, but we know very well what happens when changeling designers are left to their own devices.
A more interesting question is who will rescue them... Earth or the Equestrians.
Also, will they hook up electrical power into the Equestrian ship, so they can use it as well for growing plants.
The other problem is that it wouldn't have fuel to land... so anything inside would be obliterated on impact.
8657269 Restoring electricity to Amicitas is on my writing schedule for tomorrow.
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in theory, Earth already has its own magic field. life makes magic after all, but equal to that theory is that the field would be difficult to access even for Equestrian ponies as it hasnt been used by humans so it would feel stiff, stale, unresponsive. like the air in a room that had stayed sealed up for a long time, just...stale.
8657290 Referencing yet another excellent fic inspired by a video game, I see.
RE: MAV
There's a reason it's the Mars Ascent Vehicle. A separate vehicle carries it safely to the Martian surface.
RE: Dragonfly
So was she pumping Fireball for energy, or was she truthful about him disliking her the least? I would expect that, being a pony and a peer of hers for many years, it would be Cherry Berry to fill that niche.
RE: Hostility
I sure hope that isn't because of their displacement in the higher dimensions or their ability to perform magic. If the Equestrian rescue team arrives first, and Equus has the same thing, it could spell bad news for Mark. At least Mars only has the ability to freeze you to death.
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True. Magical plants are probably going to be more resilient than non-magical plants. With the possible exception of kudzu, but I'm not sure the weed from hell counts. Anyway, if those plants basically takes over whatever environment they end up in, that could mean very bad things for the local ecosystem.
And that's before we stop and consider what sort of magical effects those plants may have.
Then there's what could happen when magic-less organisms are exposed to a constant magical field. I wouldn't be surprised if people (and animals too) spontaneously start to develop a variety of, initially, low-key magical traits and abilities.
Fun times!
I wonder if the orbiter could use its solar panels like big signaling mirrors to morse code the surface? Slow, but bright.
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That neglects the fact that nature wouldn't let potential like that go untapped. Life, given enough time, evolves to fill all available niches and make use of all available resources. Much more likely is that all Equis life creates/uses magic, but Earth life doesn't. It would be an interesting frustration for Cherry if Mark's potatoes refuse to be affected by her attempts to help them along.
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Cherry has already gone on record saying shes a terrible farmer, if the taters fail, shed just blame it on that statment
8657307 Dragonfly's telling the truth (as best she knows it, anyway) to Fireball... and she is also pumping him for energy. You don't have to lie to get someone to like you.
Magic to electricity converter?
I wonder if it can be run in reverse!
You bet your fucking ass I am.
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And, thus, why I mention it being an ecologists nightmare.
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They won't fail, really. Potatoes are pretty hard to get wrong and Mark will be helping out. I mean they continue along like normal Earth potatoes regardless of Cherries efforts, while the cherry trees (if they are attempted) and alfalfa noticeably respond (even if not up to Equestrian farming standards).
And I should probably leave it at that before I accidentally stumble into another spoiler.
Aw. Nice
Spitfire's gonna be miffed again
Um. Someone doesn't like Mark much.
Oh boy. Emotion-reading the planet, now?
You're a changeling, Dragonfly. You can resemble anything
Hah.
Woot, it stuck. I knew it would
That was a downright ridiculous mental image
Sounds like Dragonfly has something else to boast about
Yes, saw that coming
...she tried to show him magic theory?
...yup
Oi, careful, bug! You're draining him too much!
Remarks and corrections:
> If might be different
"[It] might be different"
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Yeah I agree. The whole invasive species issue usually gets kinda messy.
Under a constant magical field I can easily see kudzu mutating into some unholy cross between a timber wolf and Audrey II.
Is 'I resent that' the expression you were aiming for? It sounds more like the typical response to Fireball's friendly ribbing.
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I had suggested there might be some kind of backup parachutes still on board. But Kris explained the unlikelihood of that.
Did Hermes get any photos, or even video of the ship being moved? Because that might make some of those heavy boosters suddenly get even more money thrown at them from other very intrested parties. If you want to throw away a few spare billion, maybe a hundred old turbofan engines attatched just to give a few hundred mph fuel free delta V start at launch? Or at least so much improvement in acceleration gives less fuel burn time to orbit etc?
Even to get in the same region as the Hab, a delivery deorbit has to be halfway round the planet, and the drop then has a good chance of lateral deviation?
How much Changeling slime is needed to build a decent sized greenhouse?
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No no. That's correct. It's a way of saying, "Yep! I agree!" instead of what you are thinking of "I hate that..."
8657479 Hermes's final run of photos did get a shot of the ship being in a different position and the rover backed up to its nose. And the satellites will have caught its movement. Earth will know Watney's trying to salvage the ship.
And building a greenhouse with slime on Mars would require that the changeling be outside its pressure suit. It's not impossible, but it'd take a lot of magic to carry off safely, so it's not on the agenda. (Also, Dragonfly would need to figure out how to do it first...)
Oh, and doesn't Amicitas have a radio? An electrically powered one?
This daily update pace is really helping with my Austreaoh withdrawal!
I really like this story, and even though it's probably intentional, I find dragonfly and fireball so unlikable
8657579 Fireball is a dragon who isn't Spike. Dragonfly is an unreconstructed changeling (the S6 finale didn't happen in this timeline). Rough edges are to be expected.
Hmm, I had this thought a few chapters ago, already: Without the ambient magic field, Dragonfly is draining everyone (and everything) around her, slowly. She doesn't (or can't) eat, herself, but the others now eat for her. The energy has to come from somewhere.
cant believe u used Captain Caveman as a reference...man u r old
8657793 Yes, I am (I turn 44 next Sunday)... but I stand by it. Mark Watney was born in 1994, so as a kid if his folks had the good cable he'd have Cartoon Network back when they still showed old stuff and Boomerang ditto. Plus, he's a geek. He loves superhero movies, and it's not unlikely he also likes other cartoons. (But not anime, or at least there's no evidence at all of interest there.)
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magic to electrical, not the same thing...
CHANGELING. PROOF. EVERYTHING.
Once NASA and Matt find out what the pony planet had to face in their space race they'll be astonished with the extent of their determination. Mostly Cherry and Chrissy, but still
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No, no. Not the converter, the communication device. Chapter 1 specifically mentions a back up radio.
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The atmosphere on Mars is too thin to land anything bigger than an oven via parachute. NASA wouldn't of wasted mass for something that useless.
8657862 Not quite true. You can't -land- solely on a parachute, but most Mars landers include a parachute as part of their descent program to slow them down enough that the balloons or the thrusters can do the rest.
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That's because the rovers are still relatively small. It gets worse and worse the heavier you get. All the proposed manned Mars landers use heat-shields and rockets exclusively. They rather have extra fuel for landing or a spare engine in case of burnout than a parachute that would barely affect the ships velocity.
"and her suit’s thruster back shook as her wings"
"and her suit’s thruster pack shook as her wings"?
It
her
8657489 Is that so? Can't say I've ever seen it used in that context before.
Hmm, after looking it up, several sources agree that it originated from The Three Stooges. But there also seems to be some debate on whether it's it's an example of malapropism.
Some say that it's a clever subversion of the phrase 'I resent that remark!', but since the character who spoke that line in the show is not a very smart person, some also argue that it's intended to be a mockery of the user's intelligence for getting the phrase wrong.
I'm more convinced of the latter; it's reminiscent of the appallingly large number of people who say 'I could care less!' without a trace of awareness that it's the exact opposite of what they mean.
I guess it still makes sense either way, though our perceptions of Dragonfly's character may differ depending on what we think of that phrase.
Its funny, i have a serious contempt for Dragons, in nearly any literature or media i cant stand them for various reasons. If someone asks why, i always joke about them all being antisocial narcissistic cringelords, so its kinda funny that thats a good description for retardball here.
I re-read this chapter, and it occurred to me: it would be like Weir to make the Frienship communicate on a different part of the spectrum than human communications. Or not digitally.
The question is if the MAV can listen to the spectrum and repeat it.
I'm really impressed that you managed to stick to the daily update schedule so far. Gives me something to look forward to each day.
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You certainly put more thought and research into it than I did. I was simply speaking of experience of hearing it used in joking conversation.
Your portrayal of Starlight is very sweet
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Dang it, now I feel old-er. Gonna hit 50 this March.
Just spotted. Is there a reason this isn't tagged sci-fi?
That thin, hateful haze explains a lot. I just hope Mars is willing to put up with its colonists should it ever get enough background magic to actively do something about them. Of course, that's far from the most probable cause of disaster.
In the meantime, communication continues apace, and EVA times have been drastically reduced. Now to see how well Cherry can augment Mark's mighty botany powers, and what the others do in the interim.
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Unfortunately, to maintain Mars orbit a ship has to be moving at least 24 km per second. At those speeds, you wouldn't have time to send more than a few letters.
8658693 I think your math might be a little bit off, since Earth's -escape velocity- is in the ballpark of eleven kilometers per second.
Let me look it up... yeah, Mars escape velocity is just a tick above five kilometers per second, so orbital velocity is less than that.
Doesn't change the simple fact that Watney would have to know to look up to see it, and that it would only work during the one orbit Hermes flies over the Hab at night.
Aw man, I ran out of chapters right as stuff started to get really interesting!
Oh well. It's not like I'll have to wait long for more. Kudos for managing this breakneck writing pace so far.
Here's hoping the friendship problems that appear to be brewing are manageable, and that we get to see some more examples of (attenuated) Equestrian magic helping them pull their weight. And Mark's reactions to these.