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Well, this is new.
A fic with Thunderlane in and he isn't a rapist? It's a holiday miracle
TFW you can see Celestia's magic on Twilight's butt.
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Really? I don't see any magic!
Is it bad if I want a sequel? It was funny and awesome.
looking pretty good
Great story.
Twilight? You mean "me"?
XD
Sorry, I'm a grammar nazi
I really enjoyed this story! I hope to see more work like this from you in the future, it was a fun and fucking awesome story.
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I am worst author. Inglish not work. Fix now. Thnxx! (In all honesty though, dude, thanks very much for the catch! Glad you enjoyed the story!)
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Of course! It was an enjoyable read! (We all make mistakes as authors sometimes )
I would hit my invisible girlfriend with the fan but I'm scared my dad will find out kay bye.
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#NotAllThunderlanes
Besides, it's not a Camel story. And you could argue that she *didn't* give informed consent, if it makes you feel better. :-p
I can see this getting featured like, real soon!
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It's very, VERY subtle but if you look super closely it's there.
I only have two things to say about this story:
1. I am VERY pissed that I never came up with this idea myself. Exhibitionism and stealth sex is a huge kink of mine, and I hate that the idea of invisibility never came to me (no pun intended).
2. Hole. Lee. CRAP! This fic was really well done! I might be gay as fuck, but this story still got me harder than a Battletoads level. Nicely done~
Calling it now, before I read further. Everyone already knows and they're all filthy perverts too.
Just get ready to call me Sherlock...
Crap. Oh well, I can play detective some other time. This was pretty good. And wow, Twi tryna save her speech was hilarious.
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Holy run on sentence Batman! (Also delete the "on" that I struckthrough)
fair
Definitely not irony. Can't think of the word, but it's related...
Ugh.
Speaking of barrels..... ever heard of barrel sex?
Ha, love this idea and I can't believe this idea hasn't become more widely explored! Cheers mate
Oh please let me do an audio reading of this~
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You've got full permission from me! Thanks very much for the interest.
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Thank you
You need a comedy tag!!! this is amazing
Top Notch shit right here! Really well written. So much so that I look to my stories in shame! Great Job
While Twilight seems to be a bit out of character in parts (might just be me), I still enjoyed this story. I might have to make something with the whole invisibility spell myself one day.
Is it possible if you can make the story how twilight and thunderlane came together. Like your story by the way.
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I love stories about ponies cumming together.
this was a great read and I always love Thundertwilight shipping, I hope you will make more with them in the future.
60% percent of the fic is just setting up the action, which is the subsequent 40%. It should be the opposite for porn, but from a character perspective, the beginning was the best part.
As for the sex itself, it really doesn't deep like it delivers. The saves are clever. But the act itself feels unfulfilled. I'm unsure how further you could have taken the action, but it feels it doesn't hit all its marks.
The prose, of course, is great.
I really like the casual way Twilight and Thunderlane discuss their sex life. It’s something that’s not normally seen in clopfics.
As in the stallion himself, or his organ?
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I love this so much
Bruh, your stories are classics, You are a G, You are Big Ass Spider CERTIFIED
The only thing 'wrong' here is the pairing, not really sure why it bothers me but it does.
The story was great though like all of yours are.
And when she gets back she gives him a good taste of an orgasm denial spell. Turn about is fair play. Still this was a hot piece, exhibitionism is always one of the finer spices of clop.
That was super good!
Twilight and Thunderlane? It’s a moderately crack ship, but you made it work. I like your interpretation of him!
Also, imagining the expressions on Twilight’s face while she was trying to maintain her composure cracked me up.
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NANI
I want that certification!
OMG, I LOVE THIS! keep up the puns!
we need more stores like this
very nice.
YES!
This be some good shit ere’ matey! Keep it up!
nice
You sure seemed to use the word "fare" instead of "fair" plenty of times.
Also, as for these parts:
LOL! Seriously, lol. I cannot state the lols strongly enough.
Also, holy goddamn fucking shit from a tight cunt-bitch asshole, Twilight sure seems to be a potty mouth. I wonder what Celesita and/or Luna will have to say about her speech when this is all over. Somehow I get the feeling Luna knew exactly what was happening on stage. I'll bet that she had some kind of counter-spell, allowing her to see Thunderlane's... activities.
Bad Twilight!
That's better.
Nah, reconsider your priorities, Twi.
The readers would agree, too.
Remember that for next time you have a deadline.
Good story!
Will there be an revenge-fic or something like that later?
*UNHOLY SCREAMING*
The story was juicy! It was so juicy and also a bit funny. Enjoyed reading it on the stream!
This should be "Practicing" not "Practising.
Hot
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Maybe try looking up words before you go "correcting" people? http://www.future-perfect.co.uk/grammar-tip/is-it-practise-or-practice/
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Aww, I'm sure they meant well though.