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NavelColt


Sibling writer and platonic love connoisseur. Cuddlefic Specialist. Analysis and fanfiction in dangerously wholesome G dosages. Support me on Kofi!

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Having finally accepted the idea of shared love magic, Pharynx has transformed. Thorax's efforts to lead an excitable pack of changelings have only eased with his broodmate's help, but Pharynx's shape and status aren't the only things to have changed. Much of Pharynx's cold demeanor has begun to thaw, presenting Thorax with something he's never had, before - an interactive, albeit slightly irritating older brother.


* Featured 12/2/18!
* Part of the Love Bug Continuity!
* Bugbro fluff (not romance/shipping) based after the events of 'To Change a Changeling'.
* Cover art by the awesome SpindleSpice.
* Live reading by Quinch!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 47 )

:rainbowwild: That pic!

Awwww...such a sweet brother story!

Absolutely adorable. Gotta love these two. Pharynx is best reformed bug horse.

Comment posted by Friendly Spartan IV deleted Dec 2nd, 2018

You do know how easily that cover art and description could be misinterpreted, right?

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If some people see things sexually before platonically, that sounds more like thier problem than mine. :derpytongue2: This show is built around breaking gender stereotypes, so if people who claim to be a part of this fandom default to sexual interpretation because they find it wrong or weird for males - especially brothers - to display affection for one another, then somebody's not paying attention to the show they're watching. :rainbowlaugh:

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You make an excellent point.

Hnnnnnngh
Approaching sirens

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Dunno mate. It looks pretty gay.
My brother and I sure as hell don't have those expressions when wrestling/fighting.

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That's probably why there's a bunch of early downvotes.

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With all due respect, the relationship you have with your brother, by extension any other examples you could possibly give me, are not some golden standard that all possible sibling relationships need to be held to, or any others for that matter. This is what I'm talking about by gender stereotypes. This ingrained idea across our society that certain things, regardless their nature of innocence, are only for certain kinds of relationships between certain genders.
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Honestly if I had known there'd be such a hangup about the inspiration artwork, I'd have waited another week when the other planned cover art got done.

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Well, I think your story here is awesome!:twilightsmile:

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See, that's where you're wrong. My relationship with every single one of my family members is the absolute golden standard for which the rest of society is held accountable.

Dad: Taught me how to play catch and serves as my moral pillar.
Mom: Baked me apple pie and taught me how to care about people.
Brother: Gave me a natural rival and taught me how to have healthy competition.
Perfect Grandma: Literally made life worth living.
Terrifying Grandfather: Instilled the fear of authority into me at a young age and prepared me for the harsh realities of the real world.
Weird cousin who can't hold a job: Makes me feel good about myself in comparison.
And so many more...

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If you'll recall in Thorax's flashback in, 'To Change a Changeling', Thorax was playing with dolls he had made, instead of fighting like the other nymphs. :twilightsmile:

For feelsies?

This is a really sweet fic. You got me to cry a few tears with this bit

Little more than a spectator on an emotional rollercoaster, Thorax felt hot tears returning to his eyes, a heat burning from within his chest. Pharynx's form and reserved smile blurred from view, and the young monarch felt his legs shake. Clenching his eyes shut, he sought Pharynx out, only stopping when his brother's body made him do so. Flashes of past attempts to embrace Pharynx rapidly filled his head - the nightmares, fear and loneliness from his childhood, all met with a cold apathy. But as Thorax shed a tear down his brother's carapace, he could already feel the difference. Without a word Pharynx had made him feel welcome - he was comfortable, and felt safe.

so good on you. I should have known :raritydespair: brother stuff always gets me.

It's annoying that it doesn't show story ratings for new stories in your feed.

I mean, here I was hoping for an M sto—er, never mind. :twilightblush:

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Seems to be what a few people thought this was, though you might be the first one who was actually hoping for it. :derpytongue2:

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These are the kinds of comments that make writing so fulfilling, thank you. :raritystarry: I'm glad it impacted you so much!

9326407 Wait, you actually mean... :twilightoops:

*checks tags*

It's NOT porn? :twilightblush:

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It's not. It's still good writing though, so, you're arguably getting more out of this than you would porn.

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Seems people missed your obvious sarcasm.

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Might have gone over better without getting milked for three paragraphs, but that's neither here nor there.
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Ikr? I won't pretend the comment is a comedic masterpiece, but I'm still amused/bemused at the reaction.

Aw, for once I can find a fic involving Thorax and Pharynx that doesn't involve shipping them and it's actually good.

Quite well done. I commend you for your craft.

To the author - yesterday saw your story in new story section & thought ''cool i'm down for a good read/story''. i'd like to throw in my two cents into this...from the picture alone could be misinterpret as something sexual for people have too much time on their hands & read much into things these days! don't ship them sexually (although i did read one where they are!) but i like their dynamitic as brothers. ship thorax with spike. We all know thorax is gay asf!
i agree with your comment about the show breaking boundaries & guys being emotional.
also do like pharynx said about him being too open, then feeling alone and depressed about it. reminds me of a scene i've written out between the changeling bros in a story of mine. it involves incest but it's more about the relationship itself,musical & apart of tetralogy which means five in greek!
p.s: pm me if you wish to know more about it if you're busy or uninterested i'll understand...we all have lives outside of writing:)

Fraternal Fluff... that’s a real rarity around here. Very nicely done.

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I'm glad I'm not the only one who's noticed that. :twilightsmile: The real lack of any stories on here highlighting these two and thier relationship as brothers is one of the story's inspirations.

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Dude please tell me the pun was not intentional

Dawwwwwwww!This was ADORKABLE! Keep up the Great work!

Notable Update:
New cover art by SpindleSpice (link in description), this story's originally planned cover art. :twilightsmile: I'll be making a blog post once they've uploaded it for linking.

I'm so glad to see this kind of fic at last. I've come to loathe the many, MANY clopfics on this site and it warms my heart to see a little bit of siblingly love that doesn't turn into incest.

9 of 10

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I couldn't find one dedicated fic of thier relationship that wasn't incest, and it greatly upset me. I have nothing against those who enjoy that, but the fact there was absolutely no fic building off thier relationship as seen in the show simply could not stand, for me. They have such an amazing and, frankly adorable dynamic, it should be explored. :twilightsmile:

What a lovely tale of two brothers

That pic
Its adorable
AWWWWWWWWW

To see this side of him... Very nice!

Haven't read it yet but that profile picture makes me think pharynx is bopping thorax

Dear Thorax, You're a Dork, but I Guess I Love You Anyway

This has to be the best chapter title I've ever seen.
Still haven't actually started reading KotLB... I NEED to, gah.

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It's got maybe 6-7 chapters left, so you could continue procrastinating and wait for the conclusion (as I believe a lot of people are probably doing) or catch up, on account of updates not being super frequent. :rainbowlaugh:

Good story. another added to my favorites and another checked off my read later list.

When he looked up again, Pharynx's face had vanished from view. Shocked, Thorax raised his head to find him, but instead found a small black nymph standing stolidly atop his chest, staring at him with frigid violet eyes. A section of the young changeling's ear was missing, and a shaggy red tail drew behind his flank, matched by a weathered fin across the back of his neck.

He was having like a flashback of his older brother and they were younger that sometimes wish that things could have been different but the most importantly they're still there for you

Awww this was actually a pretty nice story of two brothers having their moment with each other especially pharynx showing his softer side for his brother despite he wants to be a tough guy I like that keep up the good work this

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