Before Ponyville was colonized many years ago, a building was constructed in secret by a family of unicorns trying to escape the hustle and bustle of Canterlot, this home is believed to be cursed by a malevolent spirit who attacks any who come close.
This belief is disproven however, as Rarity has lived here her entire life without any incident, she even had Carousel Boutique moved relatively close by, but there is one thing she doesn't know, nor truly want to know.
There was only one room she never entered, nor tried to enter, her grandfather warned her not to go inside, to keep the door locked and the Window barred, why this was, he never said.
The secret can't be that bad.....right?
[Some chapters may contain scenes from episodes that are out of order, but this is mostly to fit the story better.]
*<>* they broke the salt line .... They Broke the Barrier oh nu
First comment. Good job on the fic so far, so many questions. Who is the ghost and why where they sealed being only a couple.
good work
Who you gonna call? Ghost Busters
Ooh, I wasn't expecting Nightmare Moon ghost. Interesting.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=yH5tilu99q4
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You are velcome
uh huh.
supernatural reference
Question, is Alicia (and by extension you') born and/or living in Korea?
[1] the word is cute-ceañera
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Uh....no?
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Thanks
Nightmare Moon said that she ruled Equestria for three years but Celestia said that she ruled for four years. May I ask which one is it?
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Believe it or not, both are correct, Nightmare Moon only remembers the three years she ruled because the fourth year she started to lose her mind, Celestia remembers the four years because her mind was stable at the time, whereas Nightmare Moon had two minds battling for control.
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Very interesting, thank you for answering my question.
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It's a reference to Kung-Fu Panda.
Near the end of the movie when Po returns and sees Master Shifu's body, and he thinks Shifu is dead.
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Nice to know that others get the reference.
Are they going to discuss about Aliecia unintentionally absorbing RRity's life force again in the next chapter or so? Also is the vial Nightmare gave to her at the end supposed to be some sort of medicine or something?
Great chapter!
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Thanks!
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You’re welcome.
Nice chapter!
noice
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I can honestly say I haven't seen that before, that is funny.
odd chapter....
Great chapter!
I thought Rarity lived in Carousel Boutique.
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In the show she does, but in this story I have her living in a house near the boutique.
Great chapter! See you in the new decade!
Nice chapter!
Nice chapter! I love the interactions with Rarity, Sweetie Belle, and Nightmare Moon!
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What to burn first
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This story sounded great, but the bad grammar kept me from getting invested. Your biggest issue is run-on sentences. You really need to learn the difference between a comma and a period/full stop. There are also a few spelling errors here and there, such as saying "yea" instead of "yeah".
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Thanks for the read and the criticism, I'm trying to get better about the writing in general but it isn't easy, but I could have sworn I fixed the grammar issues......well, I'll get around to that eventually.
Again, thanks for the read and telling me your thoughts.
Next chapter, a well known wedding with some uninvited guests.
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Perhaps, but hey, you never know what could be next.
I suppose I will say that the wedding WILL be in this story, I just need to get around to that.
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So the middle of the screen?
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Then I am afraid I have to dissapoint, I attempted to do that while working on a new chapter earlier and it just went right back to the left side of the screen.
I'll do some experimenting some time and see if I can do that, but unless I find a way, it's stuck as is.
Nice chapter!
Great chapter!
Great chapter!
Are Nightmare Moon, Rarity, and the CMC going to have big parts in this storyline coming up? Is Alecia going to appear to help the protagonists? I noticed the romance tag and whether or not it was posted recently, is there a possibility of Alecia and Nightmare Moon being in love together soon?
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I can't truly say anything without giving away any important details, but I will say that I have a surprise coming up for the invasion that I think people will enjoy.
As for the romance tag, that was always there, it's more like a really slow process that I'm working on bit by bit, it should become more pronounced later on though.
Great chapter!
Is the Changeling Invasion plot going to be shortened?
A lot of the Invasion was focused on Twilight and her views on everything, so I probably won't get any more than 2 chapters out of it, and if I'm honest, that is all it needs.
Great chapter!
If the large segment/segment does get cut, could you tell us what it was please, if you don’t mind that is?
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Sure, though I'm not sure if I'll have it as a type of bonus chapter or if I'll just put them in the Author notes, I'm undecided mostly.
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Thank you!