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PresentPerfect


Fanfiction masochist. :B She/they https://ko-fi.com/presentperfect

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Backstage before the Hearth's Warming Pageant, Twilight Sparkle makes a terrible discovery.

There's a huge booger hanging out of Fluttershy's nose.

And Twilight's the only one who's noticed.

Finished 77th out of 93 in the January, 2015 writeoff, "All In".

Cover art by Wreckham!

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I remember this. Nice to see it on Fimfiction.

Also, I misread one line as "pre-pregnant jitters?" and spent the next minute trying to figure out what Rarity knew that I didn't.

And at least the nugget wasn't fibrous.

That Fluttershy pic is the stuff of nightmares for bloody DEMONS.....

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How do lady get pageanenant?

Haha, this finally got unearthed! That was one hell of a write-off.

Could'a been worse. She could've sent it back up Fluttershy's nostril at terminal velocity. :twilightoops: :pinkiegasp:

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Oh my god thank you for showing me this XD

That was fun. In character for Twilight, even to the extent that I started thinking "this is the kind of thing I bet she'd figure she could solve with magic" about two paragraphs before she started going that way.

Also come on, no link to the OMPR comment?

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Well, I linked to the blog post at least. :B It's hard to tell in author's notes, it seems...

Ha! Comedy gold!

If only a kind creature with fingers was present. That way, Twilight could've asked him/her to pick out the problem. Too bad most people are too squeamish to do that. But not me.:trixieshiftright:

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Spike has been down this road enough times to ne'er tread it again. :V

What the hex did I just read!?- that was a surprisingly tense story. it's beautiful!

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