A scientist seeks growth and despises stagnation. Five years in Ponyville has been long enough, and Twilight Sparkle is searching for an out. She jumps on the opportunity to travel under Princess Luna's personal tutelage. Things invariably go wrong.
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Welp, definitely nothing suspicious here, minor disagreement with her sibling, whom she's known to have troubles with in the past? Take an initiative to run away with her student and teach her things, become closer to her an all that jazz. Maybe not a good sign?
And if I got the gist of that letter at the end Celestia seemed awfully okay with this idea, even if she cautioned twilight to think before she leaves. So my guess is it isn't an original letter and someone is keeping secrets...
There are many possibilities how this is gonna go. Lets see where it leads us.
The first chapter doesn't hook hard, but sets up for plenty of potential. Not sure what's going on yet, or whether it'll be good, but following.
Amazingly well written with Serious potential.
I look forward to reading more
I wish I had a nickel for every "Pr- Luna" I've read. I'd then reinvest that money into more Twi-Luna.
Good start, am looking forward to your next update
Interesting and fairly well written. I'd like to read more.
Very unique writing style. I LIKE IT!
Author, if you break Twilight's heart, I rip out your spine and use it to strangle you.
I like the way this story is written. It's not like other twiluna stories I've seen, which I like.
Good job, I can't wait to see where this goes.
Tracking.
You've done a superb job with this chapter. The setup is extremely easy to identify with, nice characterizations (even AJ's short appearance was insightful), good dialogue, easy flow and nice plot hook.
Anyway, MOAR!!!
MOAR!!!!
um that is...if you want too......dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy.png
Is this story dead atm?
soooooo... anyone here?
I really like this despite the errors in grammar even if they are few and far between. Please update soon.
Will this continue? The description was a great hook...
update this soon please
Oh I like this story. I really hope it continues.
Ah yes, a Twilight sense for when she senses a book being damaged.
I hope to read more, maybe someone will continue the story.