Anon-A-Miss occured before Winter Break, and tore down everything Sunset had built up to prove she had changed. She's the main victim of this deadly online secret teller, and everyone believes she's guilty. Including her so called friends.
It takes her to a point of no return, but at last minute before she jumps, she's saved by an unlikely ally... does she even a right to that word anymore?
Couple spelling mistakes here and there, but overall good work. I'll track to see if this goes farther.
I'm liking this so far.
Whoa! Calm down Sugarcoat!
Sugarcoat & Sunset, huh? You have my attention
loving this so far. well i have thought about doing what sunset was gonna do. i would never actually go through with it.
Here go again....
Good point Sugarcoat.
Buuuuuuuuuuuuuurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrn!
Nothing smart to say now Rainbow Dash?
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I have at one point too, I never did go through with it, I would never go through with it.
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And here we see the sassy Sugarcoat burning the Rainbooms!
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Wow that was quite the statement, Sugarcoat made towards the Rainbooms & also, its quite the grudge Rainbow has against her. I kinda want to know more about what happened between her, Indigo, & Sugarcoat
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That's fine, I don't mind, if that's what you're doing, then it's what you're doing.
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The grudge will be mentioned a few times during the story, and I'll perhaps make another story to explain the grudge more when I'm done with this one
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Sassy Sugarcoat incoming! 😂
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Sweet, its gonna be interesting to see how & what happened. Thx 4 answering
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I’d figure that would have meant you’d be out last chapter when she organized a beating.
“Can’t everything now” is there a world missing from what rarity says
Why do I get the feeling the reason Indigo dropped Dash is because of how much of an egotistical cunt she is and the only reason Fluttershy is still around is because she is too nice to drop her as well.
When I started reading this I thought it was another Dainn clone.
But, safe to say, this is a refreshing change from most of this tired genre. Count me in for the ride.
I have to wonder how many of Rainbow's friends in this story actually turned on her, and how many Rainbow just decided had turned on her when they did something she didn't like, similarly to how she acted when Sunset split the Humane 5 before the first EQG movie, and how said Rainbooms treat Sunset during the Anon-a-mess.
I love how you execute Sugarcoat's lines here in this story it is very well done!
Is this an alternate universe version? The friendship games happened after anon-a-miss, which is fine if you change but you will need to contend with even more “what?” on the part of the rain booms as now they have been even closer friends with sunset and used that friendship to turn her into a super sayan when helping twilight. You will also have to contend with how twilight handles all of this as she has practically no reason to think sunset is anon-a-miss since she wasn’t there during sunsets bully days.
Ok first, props for the adult intervention at Sugarcube Corner. I've only seen a handful of fics that do that.
Second, shout out to Sugarcoat for putting the Rainbooms in their place. (I swear the nerve of some people). Also for recognizing when someone needed help and taking initiative, not only for reassuring them but trying to get them into a better environment.
I don't think I've ever seen such a forgettable side character take point in an Anon-A-Miss story. Here's to a good ride. 🥂
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Ah, no, the Friendship Games we all saw didn't happen yet, I'm talking about the last year's Games. The Shadowbolt 6 didn't all come, just Sugarcoat for moral support. She ended up meeting Sunset Shimmer, hence why they know each other's names without having to need an introduction
Just sign it and move on with your life sunset
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Anymore adult invention in these fics you read besides the one I wrote
I'm sure that getting the paper signed will raise all sorts of hell in CHS.
All the more reason to do it.
I'm here for shipping as much as watching the world burn, at this point.
Do it Sunset.
Sunset, sometimes you just have to cut your losses. Sever the dead weight and move on with your life. It's for the best.
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Assuming the Principals clear it...
Search your feelings Sunset, you know it to be true.
9697110 Honestly, I think that the only reason that they'd care enough to raise a stink at this point is because CHS is about to lose one of its best students (academically) to Crystal Prep.
But than again there's the thing about karma, which I feel will come back to bite them, and badly, before this is over with.
9697171 If they care anything about Sunset and her safety at this point, they'll sign in a heartbeat.
Mainly because I think Principal Celestia and Vice Principal Luna would be more concerned about her health and safety that the rivalry CHS has with CPA at this point.
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Did Sunset write a ''Last Note'' before she went to The brigde, where she describes why she was going to do it?
Or was it just a fleeting thought at a opportune time.
Because if that's so, then that would be a compelling argument IF she decides to get Celestia and Luna's signature.
It would also be a very good reason for them to report it to the police for an investigation of this, as it have become a severe a serious defamation of character.
It could also be a good excuse for the to hold a school assembly where they give a Sit-rep on how bad it is, as food for thought.
Make the school body understand how far they pushed Sunset, and just who pulled her back up.
This would also serve as the threshold for the CMC to decide whether or not to cross the 'Point Of No Return'. Will they report themselves?
Anon-a-miss have directly caused with intet:
Cyber bullying.
Identity Theft.
Defamation of Character.
Mob Enticement?
....and nearly 'Involuntary Manslaughter' through suicide.
What else?
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technically if sunset decides to go through with it, there isn't a lot celestia or luna could do about it, they don't have a choice as sunset has no reason to be prevented the transfer and the other schools already given the go ahead, if they don't sign they could get into some deep shit.
well here's hoping from this point forward everyone at canterlot high finds there heart repeatedly punched in the dick.
i pray this doesn't have sunset going down the forgiveness rout, it wouldn't be healthy.
"Mind over matters of the flesh. No soldier has ever extended a hand to the enemy while under fire, and for good reason."
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It's more her telling them ''please don't try to convince me to stay'' than anything else, and something to drive the story forward.
NB: But then again... this is just pondering from my side.
Maybe something much better come in the coming chapters.
Please Sunset, start your new life in CPA.
Do it Sunset! Those assholes don't deserve you!
Wow that was fast.
It was at that moment, Rainbow Dash knew, she FED up.
Good one Sunset!
Busted!
More like Rainbow Fuck-up.
I’m amazed Luna and Sunset had six minutes worth of patience.
can't wait to see some of my fav crystal preppers, IE Lemon and SUnny
Good for you sunset.
the funny part here is cinch is likely to give sunset alot of leeway simply because of the fact that she took an abused student out of canterlot high, if that doesn't tank it's rep when it comes out she's not anon-a-miss, nothing well.
Ha! Serves Rainbow right for being bitch!
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AMEN!
Hope she meets sci two and be friends with her too, sugarcoat isn’t too mean with her and hopefully sunset can make more friends