Luster Dawn has made so many friends, she can remember almost every single one of them but when she saw a colt who’s all alone, she knew he needed some help. She talks to her teacher about him which made Twilight remember her past. It’s been a long time since she last met him and it surprises her it took this long until this day happened.
Thanks to Daniyel099 for editing this.
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Fixed that for you...
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Took care of that. Thanks.
This is pretty good! I really love the story told here, I never really thought about Star Tracker after the events of "Once Upon A Zeppelin" but it makes sense that he would have been impacted one way or another.
The technical aspects of the writing could use a bit of work. There are times in the story that felt a little awkward stylistically. You might benefit from a beta reader. That being said, I can tell you put work and care into it, so don't take that as me trying to say it's badly written. It's definitely not ^.^.
Overall an enjoyable read with an interesting idea. Keep it up!
Still a nice lil read anyway.
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fixed it.
Aww thats a nice read poor star tracker I do hope he does find somebody
I’m a little confused.