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New to writing, but really wanna try and get things out. Oh, and if you follow me, I'll follow you back. Something I got in the habit of doing back on Twitter.
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Very interesting, I'll track and see how this goes
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Arigato.
I like it but the jumps are a bit annoying
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Trust me, after this chapter, there should be FAR less time jumps.
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Good to know
Good so far
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Thanks. Trying to figure out how I want to word the next chapter, which is going to be a lore dump.
10206214
Look forward to it
Im a little confused about the pacing as it was super fast with not much time to digest the information
10206900
Sorry... This was more a lore dump chapter than anything else. In a nutshell, Fluttershy is a goddess, Chaos and Harmony are actual entities, and all the races of Equis can use magic, not just the ponies.
10207525
It would of been better to show that rather then tell but I understand your choice
I cast the spell of revelation.
Good to see it alive
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And now that I have the help of another amazing author, I should be able to keep it alive until I get it to the end!
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That's good news. My one concern is that spine is gonna be a bit one note
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How so?
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She seems to be all about violence and not much else. A simple fix is to have her gain a hobby, like cooking, crafting, swimming and so on
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Ah. Funny thing, that's actually on the agenda!
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That's good but for now she's as deep as a puddle
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Yeah, sorry about that...
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No problem
10207525
Knew it was a good idea to reread this chapter
This was pretty good and I really love how good Velvet is in this, look forward to when the next chapter comes out.
PS: its alive! Its Alive!
Spine still rubbs me the wrong way physically she isn't older then spike so how can she do things he can't like walk, talk, and fight?
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Mentality. Plus, this is an AU. In my head, I see dragons as needing to be able to defend themselves from birth, because they tend to be abandoned due to early molts.
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So why isn't spike talking and walkimg then
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Again, mentality. He can walk, we just didn't show it in the earlier chapters. And as for talking, he doesn't quite know how. He understands fairly well, but hasn't said anything yet because he didn't understand how to.
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I understand but it feels like Spine is some sort of chosen one that only wants to fight
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And I'm working to fix that.
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Doing my best (The writer of not-Spine).
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I'll be happy to assist
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And I'm grateful for the help! Looking forward for working on the next chapter with you, David!
Just read the chapter and comments and I do agree with Viper Pit, and I understand yall trying ya best bit it does help to show not tell sometimes, you could have mentioned how spike had took his first steps or something. Anyways good chapter and nice to see more of this.
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Noted.
Is Meghan related in any way to Megan Williams?
10421319
Who?
I'll feel like this chapter is missing in this
10422019
Missing in what...?
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Spike interactions
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Ah.
This is a new favorite, more please.
This was nice but more spike interactions would be nice.
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Spike is still a wee baby, is the challenge there.
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It feels like spine has replaced spike instead of being his sister
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More that she skipped infanthood, while Spike is still doing that. Spike will likely go on to do all the things he is meant to do.
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I get that but i would still like to see her actually interact with him
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That comes down to time and chances. I did try to work one in, but didn't really succeed for reasons that make sense in story.
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If you say so
Intresting
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Hehehe~... The next chapter you'll be happy~.