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"It is so hard to find a sitter with a sense of humor for Lil' Cheese." Pinkie never imagined just how much those words would come back to haunt her, but now they have. Called to Canterlot for the annual Council of Friendship meeting, she must leave her son behind.
As luck would have it, Cheese Sandwich is also unavailable to foalsit, as his "Cheesie Sense" is calling him back to Manehattan to plan a birthday party for one of his relatives. So now he and his wife have to find a foalsitter on short notice.
To the relief of both parents, a candidate soon steps forward despite her lack of experience in dealing with Lil' Cheese: Diamond Tiara. Can Diamond Tiara break the curse that has plagued so many other foalsitters for the child of Pinkie and Cheese? Or will Lil' Cheese prove to be too much even for her?
Wait, Little cheese met Mary Poppins.... wow
Excellent job on this latest one shot. Absolutely loved the work that went into the exchanges, characterizations and general wrap-up in all the right places. Downright adored Diamond bonding with Li'l Cheese and, yeah, I can understand how hard it can be to find a sitter for a kid with that kind of energy and those kinds of abilities, no matter how nice he/she might be. The mentions of a Mary Poppins Expy were well done as were Diamond AND Cheese's mentions of their families and friends.
REALLY beautiful one-shot overall.
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I sense a Dipper-Wendy dynamic coming from Lil Cheese and Luster.
Hmm, I think I know who it is.
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Awww thats so adorable And I love how diamond tiara grew up so well and even willing to babysitting for lil cheese And I like the bond between those 2 She really came so far ever since season one Good job on this story
"(Twilight had tried to sell it, but no buyers came forward, and so she had mostly kept it preserved to serve as an occasional royal retreat and a home away from home)."
I would have bought it in a heartbeat!
There is a typo somewhere around the lines you used to seperate the earlier part of the story, but I cannot find it. I think it was something that was supposed to be an n, not and m, like "tham" or something.
Aw, such a cute story, I love it! And it's strange and adorable how the cutie gives sticky hugs! XD
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Who?
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That’s Mary Poppins of course!
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Haha, oh! Yeah!
As a guy, squealing and screaming on command like a girl is not easy for me to do, but this just made me absolutely do so! Absolutely adorable
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Oddly enough I thought of Nanny McPhee first and then Mary Poppins 😆
Happy 3rd Anniversary!
Hmmm
...heh neat!
You use the words "her charge" a lot
Why is that?