A simple fan who is trying his best! Fair warning my stories tend to focus on everypony's favorite dragon!
After another defeat at the hooves of Celestia, Chrysalis comes across two dead dragons and a cracked egg. She takes the egg and hatches it believing it could be the weapon she needs against the ponies of Equestria. However, as the dragon grows, learning from his brothers Thorax and Pharynx and with the attack on Canterlot approaching, Spike will leave home to discover for himself whether he will follow his mother's orders or try peace as his brother argues for.
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I usually don’t like the Changelings stories that started coming out after the Thorax coup series. But this story managed to interest me. At least I will follow her.
I haven't read the story yet, but did you base this story on another story called For Harmony?
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I've read the first chapter of that story and plan to read more it's great! The scene with the parents was influenced by that story.
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Thanks! Yeah this story will keep the Changelings dark and buggy but Thorax is his regular self.
Spike being raised by one of the big bads~?
I’m quite interested in seeing where this goes. You have my attention L, I hope you can keep it.
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Yeah the idea of him being raised by this villain, in particular, is curious since we know at least by the comics that Chrysalis does truly care for her kind. If Spike was raised by her and beside Thorax and Pharynx who have the most brotherly bond out of every changeling, I think he would have a large love or dedication to the hive while a strong dislike or distrust of ponies. I doubt that Chrysalis would ever let Spike out of the Hive out of fear he'd be captured but Spike may know a bit of the world from Thorax who is sent out on recon missions like we know Changelings are. He may tell Spike that not all ponies are bad so this may push Spike to find out on his own and to try and find ways to help his hive.
Update.
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Soon me friend sooooon
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I was just thinking, would Chrysalis abuse Spike to make him into a vengeful dragon that would act as a secondary defense against anyone if the throne's gimmick were to fall?
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Hmm I see her as more using mental abuse and making him love her, basically what Mother Gothel did in tangled so if she was ever threatened that Spike would protect her and the Hive
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I meant that and to toughen him up so that he is battle ready like Pharynx and, with help from Thorax, keeps his kind spirit that we see in him.
Yes then. Chrysalis though will have some kind of a mini arc here which could go either way. Some part of her does see Spike as a weapon but seeing that she took care of him closely for so many years, a part of her does see him as a son. Pharynx will be Spike's teacher in fighting while yes Thorax will be the reason Spike still holds a kind spirit and why he hates killing any creature.
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When's the update?
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Soon sorry I got sick again and was away from home and my laptop for a while
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Spike's not going to be chubby is he?
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I doubt it. he's spoiled but not to the point that he is chubby, he was trained as a warrior.
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Ok. I was just checking because somehow I don't think that it would be possible for him to get fat being raised in the changeling hive.
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The next chapter is almost ready right?
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It's done
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Like update the story done or you just need to edit done?
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Pretty much update done. Just finishing some small touches.
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Got it. Just PM me if you need an OC
Intriguing... We’ve seen stories where spike was raised by those other than twilight but not one involving our favorite changeling queen. It’s not often these two are in the spotlight of these things unless it’s a clopfic. I look forward what you do. So until the fifth chapter comes about, continue to do good and take care ^>^.
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There is actually another story involving Chrysalis raising Spike called my number one dark knight, it's really awesome to see another story with the same concept pop up after the other unfortunately stopped updating.
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I saw that one, it was pretty good!
So, this fanfic is official dead?
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Not yet I thinks