A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!
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...aaaand now I'm even more into MILFS!
Thank you for such a hot read! This is definitely going in my Favorites!
You're very welcome! I'm glad you got to enjoy it.
Reading this, it appears that hazard is just lying about the pregnancy stuff, she is just there to recieve the census, and tell them this story, adding the fun part too, so he will just go away, is a though, Bell may go to the hospital to confirm her statement, and all may true, who knows, thouhg this fic was very good dude, i wouldn't mind a sequel, it certanly has the potential for many chapters.
It's a good story folks, take it from the chief editor. I went over ever work,d anD I'm happy to see how much better it was from even the absolute thrill l ride it was before.
Read it, fav it, slap it in your will, Hazard's a joy to see when she's working her carnal magic.
And thank you again, Steel Quill, for a fantastic FIMFic.
Such A Hot Story!
Definitely One Of My Favorites.
Excellent Work Steel!
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Thank you both so much! And thank you again, Vis, for your editing work. It really helped to polish this up.
Oof. 👌
I. Hazard....
Is this an scp fiction?
I haven't finished the story yet, but I'll feel like I can call it here.
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It is not an SCP story, I'm afraid, far from it.
I do love a thicc horny milf fiction
And I've yet to see a sub-par upload.
I really liked this! So creative and interesting. Good characters, nice simple story, and pretty sexy.
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Thank you very much!
This was a lovely read! In my view at least one of your best works so far lately ♥
Not that they are not amazing, they are but yeah really loved this read
Hopefully there will be a continue or more like this.
This is beautiful stuff. Very hot.
Teach me, senpai
Steel Quill... There's a name I've seen around. Honestly never been a huge fan of MILF's - I like em young and restless, ya feel me? But you seem like a good chap and this seems like a pretty good story. Time to do my thing and give it some longform commentary.
The first and only time I've seen et cetera spelled out like that in pony fiction. Heh.
It is proper to capitalize Her Majesty which is an honorific like 'Doctor' or 'Senator' when used in specific reference to an individual. In the United States, it would be like referring to "Mister President".
This error comes up a lot in this story. New paragraph or sentence, you must capitalize the first word. The ellipses are also very excessive throughout.
Comma after metallic.
That is a lovely description.
This is a great example of LUS that actually works correctly in context. You love to see it.
Overly verbose: I'd cut down the end to say 'her four legs'.
Period at the end.
Nice equine behavior reference.
I do find it interesting given the prevalence of so many humanizing descriptions like "children" and the presence of so much human technology but you are an anthro guy at heart, so I can cut you some slack.
Comma after you, not a period.
You are either very lucky or very Canadian because 'overtop' doesn't scan as a word in American English but it does in Canadian.
You are therefore technically correct which is the best kind of correct.
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What she isn't saying is that it might be her day to go into town and buy a safe. She's not one for trusting banks with her money.
You wrote one banger of a fic! Liked and favorited.
I really like your narration. It reminds me of my omniscient narrator days back in 2015. Pretty descriptions of colors and shapes are a nice aid, especially in your work featuring OC's. IH comes off as genuinely alluring and I say this as a guy who is in no way attracted to MILF's generally. You've impressed me; this is the hottest I've gotten reading someone else's clop in a very long time indeed. Great job!
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If there is one thing I love, it’s a thorough commentary. Thank you so much! I’ll be sure to improve and put the effort into its sequel!
You obviously haven’t met Heartbreak.