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Moonghost


I like discord and king Sombra and writing

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Jim Jones went to comicon as a mix Ramses De Nile from monster high and Hawkmoth from Miraculous and was Displaced by The Duke after buy Ramses's cane and all the miraculous. now He lives in southern equestria as the Pharaoh of the sands.

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Comment posted by Moonghost deleted May 18th, 2021

I know you said that it was Twilight's choice but what a certain one was calling her like say the ladybug. But seriously my choice would be the fox.

Cat:1
Fox:3
Ladybug:1
Horse:0
Turtle:0
Peacock:0
Bee:0
Monkey:0
Dragon:1
Snake:1
Butterfly:2
Mouse:0
Cockatrice:0
Bat:0
Rabbit:2

I put my vote for cat

Wait, who's the Duke? Don't you mean the Merchant?

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The Duke is a character mentioned in resident evil village A.k.a. resident evil 8
he’s the Games merchant.
And is implied to be friends with the merchant

While the plot is good it feels rushed, and may I add that there needs to be more variation than this character said. Right now what you're doing is telling the reader and not showing them what's happening.

Comment posted by Moonghost deleted May 28th, 2021

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Sorry I forgot to mention everyone gets two votes

Comment posted by Moonghost deleted Jul 2nd, 2021

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If that's the case, I'll do Rabbit a second time.

By the way if two of them get tied then I’m going to use them both

So has everyone who wanted to put in votes, Who wanted to put in votes?

I must remind you that the votes are giving you oh my work on this pole and you cannot save them up for another pole

So has everyone voted who wants to vote? I must remind you do have two votes. For those of you haven’t used the second vote.

My second vote is butterfly

I think butterfly would be best considering she will be able to learn to think more and have be calm more.

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Yeah. I think the rest of them don't show her power off well and considering that she tends to panic having to make others the hero will calm her.

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