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MASTERMIND360


This is MASTERMIND360, new FIM author here. A brony who always enjoys making Equestria Girls stories that took place after season 2 ended. Stay coolio and stay tuned...

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This story is a sequel to Sunset's medication


Sunset has forgotten about her medication, causing her PTSD raging and now she's been taken to a
mental hospital. And it's like a place where no one wants to go.

Everyone at CHS were planning their own prison break type scenarios to rescue that one Equestria girl.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 18 )

10700369
Thanks for the correction:twilightsheepish: I didn't think.

Okay. I have so many thoughts this story. It would take an PM to explain it to you, but let me summarize the issue in one sentence: Grammar needs work. Do you want me to explain the specific issues to you in a PM? I would live to.

10700470
Oh yeah, sorry. :twilightsheepish: I honestly thought my grammar was fine.

Thanks for pointing that out.

while I've a lot of problems with this story, it's ridiculous enough to be entertaining.

Comment posted by MASTERMIND360 deleted Feb 28th, 2021

10701053
Fixed. Sorry, I thought I was replying to someone else's comment:twilightsheepish:

10700772
Also, again, it's your opinion, I don't really mind. Even though I already made it clear that I was inspired by one of the episodes in Holidays Unwrapped

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I know, as I said, the sheer insanity of the plans is pretty entertaining, it's just some of the decisions in characters and portrayals annoy me some. But as you said, just my opinion

10701086
Horror movies gives you the paranoia fuel.

Note: The term paranoia fuel is used as a trope in the TV tropes website.

When will the next chapter be out?

These scenarios are hilarious! Keep it up! :moustache:

It's a pity that this was canceled. Most people are freed from mental hospitals as soon as they recover enough so they won't hurt themselves or others. There are few exceptions where they have messed up in a big way and unfortunately because of that innocent people end up in their care. When you actually need help they are good for it but if you don't well that is a whole nother story.

Class ended at 2:50 P.M. The girls and the rest of their schoolmates walked outside of Mr. Cranky's classroom, and just like the rest of them, he too is planning a heist to rescue his student, he was currently writing a plan of his own a piece of paper.

A caring Teacher. I bet his plan is striate out of 'Hogan's Heros', or 'the Great Escape'

Twilight stepped onto the school grounds, and as expected, everyone else still discusses their own illogical "rescue" plans for Sunset.

At least this shows that they all care.

Twilight, who was at the other table, eavesdropping on their conversation, slammed a book to her face, she couldn't get any crazier by all of her schoolmate's ridiculousness.

Want to bet on that Twi?

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