After saving Wallflower from an abusive home, Sunset figures the best way to help with her girlfriend's years of trauma is challenging the restrictions she's lived with all her life, like with saying curse words.
Turns out, Wally's very good at that.
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Content Warning: While this story has elements of comedy, it also contains realistic discussions/depictions of abuse and PTSD/C-PTSD.
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Amazing cover art by our lovely friend Sandy \o/
Edited by I-A-M and Posh (the best and cutest one)
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"This was hilarious and stupid and touching."
~Dave Bryant
before i even read this: amazing chapter titles
Haven’t read it yet but I saw the title and instant knew it was Scampy lol
fuck
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She has that effect on people.
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All credit goes to Scampy for those. She's a literary genius.
An early sign that things are bad. Being unable to enjoy food at home or maybe even eat enough.
I feel this.
I recognize this metaphor
Same
Relevant:
Already hit the Feature Box and it hasn't been out for an hour! (Puts in RiL, swears to read it).
Fuck.
I swore to read it.
Yeah, I ain't leaving. I know what I did and I'm proud of it!
This made me smile
I 100% agree with Dash here
I love this supporting Rainbow
This was adorable changing point
Well, I'm glad Sunset got Wallflower out of there.
Brutal, but so well done. I'm glad at least she didn't feel the need to hurt her more by making the process harder than it needed to be.
Fucking perfect
You two always make these two sound so adorable and wholesome despite what bad things happen before and/or after.
The power of adorable child (you should be concerned Sunset)
perfect reactions
....you didn’t know?
Yep, I knew this was coming. Even if something helps, taking things to an extreme just creates new problems.
Panicking Sunset will never not be funny
Deja vuÂ
Knowing Sunset, opening a flirting booth would probably earn her more money than the two jobs combined.
A savior’s worst nightmare
I can see what you meant when you said this was more serious than Accidentally in Yeet. This is certainly a more serious handling of a serious matter while still providing a good laugh here or there.
I can't say I enjoyed this as much as Yeet, but I think that's kind of the point. It's that good kind of uncomfortable feeling when things go bad.
Masterwork job as always, and can't wait for your next collab.
Also, those are some great fucking titles.
I must applaud Sunset for having Chains the strength of adamantium holding her fury back for so long as it did.
Loved it!
I came to this fic expecting funny swearing jokes, saw the warning about c-ptsd and didnt think much of it, only to get absolutely blindsided by Feels
Sunset is a comfort character of mine, and seeing her help Wallflower learn to handle her C-PTSD really hit home for me. Even though it wasn't all sunshine and rainbows, and the end didn't fix everything, that just makes it even better. Problems aren't easily fixed with a snap of one's fingers, but they can be fixed if one puts the effort in. Sunset and Wallflower still have a lot to learn, about each other and about themselves, but that's the beauty of humanity.
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go to the arcade and dab on a kid. Might be cathartic, if Wally's experience says anything.
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So glad to see our story is having the impact we hoped it would 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
I think this was an excellent opening chapter.
A lot of people, when writing stories like these, often break the rule of "show don't tell."
In this chapter, you accurately show Wallflower's mental state through nervous and agitated behavior.
Good job!
I agree, math sucks
Small steps Wallflower. Small steps.
Haven't read it but a clip from wrestling popped into my head with the swearing.
https://www.dailymotion.com/video/x7cgt8"We will only use the words 'ass', 'damn', 'hell' and 'b***h'. We will use the words 's**t', 'f**k' g*****n', 'j*********t', 'f*****' or any other racial or sexual slurs"
"Ah s**t"
Watch your f****** mouth! G*******t"
Nonono you need to tell her....
... and I say that because I've been in this spot. Getting out of a horrible controlling environment and realizing you're free often makes people go to the extreme in the opposite direction of things before they find balance. I know I did (and still sometimes do)... and it's so hard to make yourself go backwards, even just a little bit, but the world doesn't stop or wait or understand while you figure you out. It doesn't care, so you have to find a way to figure yourself out in a way that it can somewhat accept. It sucks, so much, but... Stars, this is a good fic.
This is so good. I loved every second of it.
I wrote this and these two charlatesbians beat me and took it away. Please cancel them.
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I will do anything for Posh
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Eat shit, shiteater qB^)
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Yea, something's not right with Wallflower.
To quote a wise bone flower: "One doesn't feel average temperature by alternating between burning and freezing."
And so the healing process begins in earnest.
Well done Scampy and Gay for Gadot. Thank you.
This was hilarious and stupid and touching. As I knew it would be, because you two could not have produced anything less. Beholder is correct—Sunset in a panic is never not funny, poor girl—and Wallflower’s pachinko-ball path through this whole arc is completely plausible. The echoes of Wallflower’s mother in her own actions are horrifying but make perfect sense. If either of the girls stopped for a moment to consider that resemblance it might be an epiphany, if a very painful one.
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“Fucking pollen everywhere in that office,” Wallflower swore, sniffling. “Anyway that was a waste of fucking time. I’m gonna become a Scientologist.”
It has the outward appearance of a troll fic but with the substance of a serious issue. Much like how Wallflower's swearing is comical at first but hides some serious psychological trauma.
Wallflower's use of swearing and wild activities to cope with trauma is very believable. It's almost like someone who's been trapped in a restrictive environment for so long and suddenly getting her first taste of freedom.
Also: emojis in title!
your misandry is showing
I'm imagining her screaming it so loud here that Wally goes super saiyan, haha.
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We are literally lesbians, dude.
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oh my god late night you are so fucking stupid, you are the stupidest son of a bitch around, you are so uniquely unintelligent, how the fuck do you not realize that this is a joke about them being gay women in a relationship and not a joke about them and the authors hating men you smoothbrain son of a bitch, I’m going to write a story about your OC being trans and there’s nothing you or your 2.5 brain cells can do about it
EDIT: Late_Night you fucking dunce I can’t reply to your copy-pasted DM chest-beating if you have me blocked
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how do I pin a comment on fimfic
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An interesting way of saying that the characters are lesbians and have no interest in men.
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no bro the lesbians won’t fuck you
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how have you not fucked off yet
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What dose that mean?
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So basically it happened like this.
Step one.
Square roots are invented
Step two,
Try that for negative one.
Step three
impossible.
Step four
i
Step five
New mode of mathematical geometry
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If you were referring to the anecdote, consider the scenario posed by the quote:
In order for someone to feel the "average" temperature, they first jump in a pool of boiling water for one minute, then into a pool of freezing cold water for one minute, then back to the boiling water, then to the freezing water, etc. Mathematically, they are experiencing the average temperature between the two because they're moving back and forth and spending time in the two extremes equally, but functionally they are alternating between scalding and freezing themself, so the end result is actually damaging rather than healthy.
Fundamentally, its the idea that going from one extreme to the other doesn't actually mean you're evening out in the end, or that it is a healthy way to achieve balance. In fact, it may be harmful.
If you were referring to what is a bone flower, it's something from Kindred of the East, a part of the World of Darkness roleplaying game setting. Specifically, the Song of Shadows philosophy held by the Cathayan vampires, who's practitioners are called Bone Flowers. Even if it's for an RPG, there are still anecdotes in it that I found compelling because there's a certain amount of truth to them.
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If you're looking for that kind of SunFlower scene, you can check out my latest story as well.
Great job, my friend. As always :)