Rainbow Dash wants to help Scootaloo learn to fly, but the laws say she can't unless the squirts family agrees. Maybe twilight will be able to help.
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Some interesting worldbuilding you're doing.
One note, it seems unrealistic that those old codes (unification was over 1000 years ago) wouldn't have been updated, especially with the prevalence of mixed families.
e.g. Unless I misunderstand, under the system you described Pound Cake would be ineligible to receive flight training, ever.
cute and cannot wait to see more though did see a few typos that are basically just using a homophone.
Aside from a few grammatical errors This has my attention
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same here lol
Before I read this, I must know: Why wouldn't Scootaloo's parents help her?
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Scootaloo's parents aren't in the picture....for reasons.
sooooooooooooooo adorable
nice chapter and looking forward to more
"Pinkie popping out of nowhere saying SOMEONE SAY PARTY? excitedly"
Oh Pinkie you never say those words if you want things to go well
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What about her aunts, then?
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Context? I mean there's a lot of "hers" in this story lol
pretty good but a few errors here and there like "hear" instead of "here"
so adorable at the end
Celestial is hilarious when she acts like that!
I love how it's going so far! It's sweet and funny! I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Scootaloo usually lives with her two aunts when her parents are away. Their names are Holiday and Lofty.
“It’s like in this game I like to play about teenagers training monsters,” Scootaloo giggled, “’Spike used Tail Whip! Its super effective!’” this and all the other Pokemon references were funny
Spike would be a good pokemon.
Amen
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What could possibly go wrong
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A dragon/fire dual type right? XD
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Yep! His moves would probably be Mystical Fire,Dragon Breath,Dragon Claw and Flamethrower.
Insta-grandma TM
Good story, there were a few typos but I can't wait to see where this goes