Beyblade, they say that the first Beyblade was created from meteorite that fell from the heavens hundreds of years ago.
Since then, creatures from around the world use these beys in competitions and strive to be the best. One day a young colt name Red Spark, moves to Ponyville with his mother and grandfather from far off land is now going to the school of friendship where he meets the young six.
He may have moved to a new home, is now going to a new school, but his love for Beyblade has not gone away. Join him and his Bey Achilles on his journey to become the best there ever was.
3... 2... 1... Let it rip!
Chapters (3)
My favorite always is Valtryek
I think you did a good job with this as a first chapter and it seems interesting. I also really like Achilles, and I think it is a bit unfair so many are biased against Achilles and Aiger for replacing Valt and Valtryek.
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If either one of you has any ideas on which Beyblade should be in the next chapter, you can let me know
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Sprynzer, for example?
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That's good
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And Roktavor too
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Good
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Maybe Xcalibur could show up eventually because that has always been a powerful Bey. I also like Dragon from Rise, but I understand if you don’t want to use that one.
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You all make great ideas. I don't think about which chapter they'll come in
Is this gonna have elements of the metal series in it
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It might
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I hope so
There is an error in your chapter:
Bolt Light's Bey would have to be "Wonder Valtryek", not "Genesis Valtryek" (since the second was used in the "Evolution" series and the first in the "Turbo" series alongside Z-Achilles):
static.wikia.nocookie.net/beyblade-burst-turbo/images/c/cf/Anime_wV.png/revision/latest?cb=20190308170712
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Okay
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Much better
Those simultaneous burst finishes can go on for a long time sometimes.
reboot driver? the one that use reboot driver is God Valkryie/Genesis Valtryek, not Wonder Valtryek.
Well, I haven't watched that much of Beyblade from the Burst series, but I say this fanfic is interesting
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Thanks
Emperor Fourneous is probably the fastest and most agile Defense type.
What a good battle and a good story.