Rarity is a busy mare, but such is the life of an up-and-coming young fashionista like her. Between designing her newest gowns, overseeing multiple shops in multiple cities, all while managing to maintain her social life, she hardly has time for anything else. There are some things, however, some ponies, that she will always have time for, such as that little red-headed filly gazing through her window of her boutique.
Featured 12/3/22 - 12/10/22
This is such a beautiful look into the heart of Rarity. Twist deserves a most magnificent ensemble!
Very well done.
I'm pretty sure I'm one of Twist's biggest fans out there, and so I'm always happy to see her get more love from the fandom. This is getting added to the Twist group. (It's also, as previously commented, a great take on Rarity and her view on other ponies.)
Twist is always adorable 🥰
I've done my own share of stories that made it into the featured box. But this most certainly deserves to be up there. There are no standards under which that shouldn't happen.
And Snails falls in love with her head-over-hooves after this.
I just realized:
The title is ripped right out of the show's theme song!
"Big adventure! Tons of fun! A beautiful heart! Faithful and strong!"
AHHHHHH!
I love your description. And of course, a bit of psychology on the thought process of best pony, never hurts. Thanks for writing.
A simple enough tale, but very well done. Congrats.
Very well written and really wholesome. The description at the beginning really flows beautifully. For example:
I love how you've used similar sentence constructions to kind of highlight the similarities between Rarity and the ponies around her while still trying to give the impression you're highlighting differences.
Well done, all around!
I clapped after reading this. Wonderfully done.
One of my favorite things about media intended for children (which I don't see nearly as much in media intended for adults) is that it shows the audience characters and heroes who they're supposed to want to be like. I really like the feeling of seeing a character in a piece of animation, or a book, or a game, or wherever, who is the kind of person I can look at and think "Wow. I want to be like that."
This story, whether meant "for children" or not, gives me that feeling about Rarity, and I very much appreciate that. So, thanks.
And Spike helps you with everything?
Oh?
I hear it from...
Spike helps her model and sew...
Spike's always hanging around her...
He's had a crush on her for years
Spike is many things...
I know... But
He tried to save her from the Diamond Dogs
He used his fire breath against the Storm Kings Troopers
He befriended Discord and The Changeling King
He kidnapped Rarity he went all greedy and stuff
He grew wings and saved her from a Rok and saved her from Chrysalis
and
I'll always have my Rarity time... So that's how it works.
Let start on your dress ... Okay?
Okay, Is Spike going to help?
Simple yet solid. Superb!
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Yeah that's one value that children's media has. They know they are building the future. Maybe adults feel like they are at a point where they falsely believe it's too late for them. But that's one reason everyone not even just teens reading these stories should be insoired by these stories.
Although for inspirational heroes for adults, there are some great ones like Andy from Shawshank Redemption or Rocky Balboa.
This is beautiful.
It’s gone straight to the special shelf of my Favourites list.
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Very sweet story. I love when Rarity's beautiful heart (:D) is the center of the story.
Twist is adorable and deserves love. I'm glad she gets it here.
That was a good story.
What a lovely little character study. And a dimension to Rarity we seldom saw.
An oddball ghost happened across your fic and read it. Have a review!