One fateful day, the moon Princess has an almighty cold. One so almighty that it causes her to sneeze in royal Canterlot.
A nearby breezie approaches her in an attempt to quieten the racket. One thing leads to another and the moon inadvertently snorts up the breezie.
A little discombobulated, the little fairy pony has to explore to find his way out.
The term is "fateful", as in a day made significant by fate.
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Cheers, I've changed that. :)
Wonder what happens when Luna's tracking spell points directly into her own brain. Enjoyable read, seeing Luna controlled basically like a glitchy video game character was quite fun!
Cute story!!!
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An adorable story, great job.
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Thanks for the kind words. :)
It is a preposterous anatomical notion that a foreign object may be "sneezed" through the nasal cribriform plate into the cranial cavity. (There is no mention of a defect caused by cancers or other osteopathic illnesses.) Furthermore, there are no empty spaces between the brain and the skull, it is occupied by cerebrospinal fluid and the meninges. However, I do appreciate the "whimsy" element of the story.
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As long as I got the presence of a fully functional bedroom room right.
I think my stories thrive off absurdity. :)
Heh. Somehow I love these lines.
I love how you keep playing with words like that.
I would post more examples here, but I don't want to make this comment too long.
Weird, isn't it?
You better didn't put particular much hope into that...
And I'm sure the cables look like chaos itself.
Coincidence?Maybe you can use the computer to explain Celestia the whole problem.
I'm sure the sun has a plan.
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
This story is probably a one-shot, but do you have and thoughts on how the situation will continue?
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I'm glad you enjoyed :)
I had quite a few ideas on how the story would continue. I did have plans for some additional chapters, but the ideas felt a little off to me from how the breezie reacted to the initial situation.