Sunset Shimmer had recently graduated from Canterlot High School. Now in her 40s, she is a successful businesswoman living in the city. However, something about her current situation feels a bit... off....
She wonders why she is so successful
why does a purple ghost keep flashing in her nightmares?
Additionally, why does she own a fancy crown?
So...Spike has some beef with Sunset?
It's an okay start. Parts of it seem to have conflicting tones, and some scenes repeat themselves after a paragraph or two. I'm thinking that you may have written this in different parts and then came back later to add more, without re-reading the whole thing and didn't realize you were repeating yourself. Also, there were some grammatical errors, and some sentences didn't start with capitalized letters.
You may want to get a proof-reader?
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