Before the days of the palace-city of Canterlot, the Princesses held their court and personal cities deep in the Everfree. In Luna's city of Equinox a mare loses her fortune and decides to visit the bridge connecting her home with the city of the Sun.
There she meets a fate far worse than the loss of one's wealth...
Inspired by HÃd-avatás.
Proofread by Equimorto, Not That Anon, and Etyco Filly. Thank you again!
Despite not being aquainted with the source material, I liked the story. The writing was downright beautiful, and I appreciated the scenes you invoked in the reader's mind.
My knowledge of geometry leads me to question if 'prism' might perhaps not be the word you wanted?
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Yeah, can we get an English translation of that? This is as far as my web-fu got me: https://www.gutenberg.org/author/Arany,+J%C3%A1nos .
I tried running the link in the long description through Google Translate, but while the result generally made grammatical sense, I felt much was lost in the actual meaning.
P.S. although translating the footnotes provided some answers.
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I used prism there to imply the Moon is glowing/refracting light. It might not be entirely physically correct, but I was more going for the artsy quality.
Sadly there isn't one, as far as I know! I could try to make one, but I'm firm it wouldn't quite give back the pathos of the original as it employs both rhyming and rhythm to make the story flow.
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Thank you very much!
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Ah... I see... I will mention the word 'mirror' as being perhaps more traditional, but understand that might not fit the particular poetic choices you were going for.
A comment for the algorithm, btw.
This was great!
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I'm glad you liked it!
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Thanks
That was a good story.
Ooooo, good fic, I like it!
8/10, cute short story