One little dream is all it takes to brighten your life,
But how long until you make the dream a reality.
Third Part of the Magic is Love Series
Twilight Sparkle X Applejack
Disclaimer: Aside from the basic story idea I make no claim to anyother material unless otherwise noted
I am only going to say this once, HOLES.
This whole story suffers from the fact that Applejack keeps calling Twilight 'miss Sparkle', once is okay as a joking remark, but right now it just feels like an alternate universe version where they're not even really friends.
The Spiced apple thing is also a little convoluted and serves no real practical purpose in light of the story.
All in all, I think this story could use some work and I'd be happy to look it over with you.
*reads description*
Sounds good!
*reads story*
way to ripoff Holes.
HOLES!!