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Dice Warwick


Dislexic tring to wright storys, makes gammer natzie eyes bleed.

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Not bad for the prologue dice-warwick I like it looking forward to see how the story of harp melody will go and who will be the pony that will steal her Heart as her journey progress!

More fine work, I can't wait for more.

Heck yaa back to my favorite weekly Friday night release of more of your work.

I'm really liking how harp I'm going through her issues

Harp does not take any bs from anyone. Very nice. Can't wait till next week for more.

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ya, the problem is finding the right balance with it, like with Star. I can't have Harp be a wreak all the time, but the cracks also needs to be there. Just going back and remembering where she has actualy been, Harp has seen some serous shit. Unfortualy she is also the leader, and she cant just brake down and cry about it.

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Well she is royalty, and weakness is a provocation. It's also nice so she her grow here and their when it comes to conflict.

Yaa new chapter! But sadness as I have already completed it. :( I will just have to wait till next week for more of this very very fine work. Thanks for your hard work!

Yes more new Desperado’s and Dresses.

More fine work as normal. I do enjoy how you tie in content from other fallout equestria stories into your work.

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ya, though I wish I read more Fo:E. since I started writing, less time went into reading other fics.

Fizzy really sounding "like" freaking shaggy out here

New party member x1 cola pony!

Nice work as always! Can't wait till next week

New chapter and more plot. Can't wait for next week.

Why do you make me wait so :( your chapters are so well written that I can't wait for the next one!

More fine work as always and the store gets better and better.

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Indeed this was a new one.

More fine work as always.

New Friday and new chapter, and more horse words. Fine work as always

New Friday new chapter, and a road crew reference!

Again, more fine work as always. I like how you keep integrating all the Friends, enemies, rivals, and just about any other groups they have meet along the way.

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I try, the world doesn't revolve around Harp after all, though right now she is an important pony in this area. And when politics are invold, things tend to get messy with how many people want a piece of any pie. I also try to make the conflict as natural as possible, as this isn't a place were you can just kill someone and get what you want... well you can, but a lot of powerful people will get very annoyed, and a bit worried. but the whole point of this story is preventing things from devolving into barbary, and how much that can suck at times.

Dude! That B*tch is back. Nice and unexpected, here I was worried Harp was having it to "easy"

Nice work! Harp just dropped the big verbal smack down, and come out looking Good. More fine work again.

God damn harp was really giving them verbal combos

More fine work. Can't wait till next week.

New Friday new chapter new awesome!

The main reason for this was to go over our plans for today, as we were once again very bussy. As much as I like Fizzy, and trusted Lair enough to be sure she'd keep our secrets, this needed to stay between us and us alone.

I know it's supposed to say very busy but when I read it as Bussy I died laughing:rainbowlaugh:

Somebody been cooking in the malevolent kitchen huh

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ya... dyslexia is like that...

Very nice work, also don't mess with Fizzy because she has a little secret that will not be messed with.

The magical art of gaslighting

More fine work and more waiting for next week.

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