A blue unicorn from Sire's Hollow named Astrospark goes on a long and dangerous journey to discover the strange lands beyond Equestria to find a mysterious Alicorn Princess while trying to learn how to be brave.
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WingLord
The man who believes that the secrets of the world are forever hidden lives in mystery and fear. Superstition will drag him down.
WingLord
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Haven't read, but BIZZARE ADVENTURES?!?!?!?!?
IS THAT A JOJO REFRENCE!?
Apologies Mr. Winglord
The matter you have re-written the chapter may not be once sir.
The sentences after the corresponding quote has a feeling of it being overly rushed. The premise setup was to endow the reader the foundations of what the character within had experienced. However, an effect made forth after the wish had corroborated an oversight of an amplified cliffhanger, I may reason for yourself, Mr. Winglord.
That the chapter ending taken place after the wish is made to be configured to instead of a star having blinked or stutter its lighting, the pony in questioned to experienced tire and sleep, and then afterward would the effect be made.
This concludes with the reader having pertain to having an idea of what may occur after, the character within would be unaware, thus the inclusion of mystery and would certainly make for a nice apprehensive moment.
Again. Apologies for the idea made known after the re-writing had been concluded once.
Good day, Mr. Winglord