Scootaloo's new master

A lone pegasus filly waits, trapped inside of a cage for somepony to buy her.

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MLPstories101

MLPstories101 #1 · 1 week ago · · ·

Great… more slavery…. Sheesh might as well make Adolf Hitler dictator at this point.

Story was cool tho.

DeathToPonies

DeathToPonies #2 · 1 week ago · 1 · ·

I'm not really a fan of "savior slave owner" stories, but who am I to judge, eh? It's well written at least!

I'm a bit confused by your protagonists motivations. If he was sympathetic to Scootaloo and took her despite her deformities - probably to "save" her - why does he still rough her up and treat her like shit?

Scootaloo started to see green trees and the carriage started to get warmer. "So slave, tell me more about yourself."
Scootaloo appeared surprised to be asked a question like a common pony, "What do you mean?" Scootaloo asked.
Scootaloo yelped in pain as Thunder slapped her again, "You will address me as, master. Now tell me about where you was born and who your parents were."

This is where I lost all sympathy for your MC and called him a bastard, lmao. I'm curious to see how the story goes, currently wishing for an uprising where Scootaloo manages to kill him