Up in the frozen north of Equestria lies Base Forty-One, an Arctic base that was created after the Canterlot Wedding to insure no changelings can get through to the more populated areas of Equestria and suck the love there dry. The four guards stationed there are about to ask one question: Who can you trust when there's a changeling in your mists?
Loosely based off of the short story Who Goes There? And the movie John Carpenter's The Thing. (When I mean loosely, I mean loosely. I have never seen the movies or read the short story, but I do know the basic premise.)
Chapters (1)
I hope you enjoy this dumb story!
No one can here my screaming either.
First Thumbs up!
Hmm, someone made a pony version of "The Thing." Now all I need to read is a pony version of "Alien" and my life is complete.
Spy in our midst
no acknowledgment towards your pre reader?
Loldl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png don't worry about it, I'm glad that the story is getting a good reception
Take care
1675932 Sorry.
Only this time will it ever slip my mind.
1675180 I'm proud of you.
1675451 Well, I can't help you with that. Still, how was this story?
1675521 It's not me I swear!
1676835 I liked it. Though, to be honest, I think that it could have been this multi-chapter project with a lot of suspense, paranoia, and everything that made John Carpenter's The Thing work. But still, a good short story with a decent twist(?) at the end.
I'm gonna have to be the first 'fail'...Why? 'Cause this isn't the Pony version of The Thing. There's only one changeling, Lance is...not a very fleshed out protagonist...
And, the Changelings aren't as effective infiltraitors as The Thing. And the actual changeling was FAR too set up. And the finale came far too quickly.
1677799 That's fine by me, everyone has an opinion, so thanks for the input. I wasn't trying to get featured or EQ Five Star rating, I was just writing for the sake of writing. This was an idea that wouldn't leave my head and I wrote it down. I'm thinking about redoing this to make it longer and have some character development, if any. (Character's are not my forte in writing.) Thank for this input you have gave me. I'll try to absorb this so I may write better stories later on with more dynamic characters.