Anvilicious

"WE'RE ANVILICIOUS!"

(One-shot Crack story inspired heavily by the Twilightlicious fad as well as, of course, the brand new MLP episode, "One Bad Apple"
Title comes from the Trope term.)

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Regidar

Regidar #1 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

Finally some Babs.

ChainReaction

ChainReaction #2 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

This one made me laugh pretty hard! Subtlety? That means booby-trapping parades, right?! Great job as always, CG.

Shadowed Rainbow

Shadowed Rainbow #3 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

Why is there no character tag for Babs yet?1

archonix

archonix #4 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

We're the A to the N to the V I L and ain't no other moral gonna drop so well we're ANVILICIOUS. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Scootaloo_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Applebloom_lolface.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Sweetie_Belle_lolface.png

Master Lyra

Master Lyra #5 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

Okay, since no one is posting a helpful review:
This was... pretty dumb. That Twilightlicious fad never really appealed to me. At all. It was dumb, and making a story off of it (if you can really call it that) also seems dumb. It was short and cute, so I'll give you credit there. Nothing really happens, I guess, but nothing really is supposed to. I give it a 7/10.
Grammar and spelling and stuff was almost perfect, so that's a nice change.
I'd be curious to see if you can make a real fiction, real as in a serious/longer fiction.

Nexidava

Nexidava #6 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

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And it wasn't even handled THAT well...
- Babs got no punishment whatsoever, despite violence, property damage and general belligerence.
- Being bullied is no excuse: if we used the 'X begets X' argument as a defense, we'd be letting off A LOT of serious offenders of violent and abusive crime.
- Running away to a different town isn't exactly the preferred method for dealing with bullying...

Ah well, hopefully they won't be quite so anvilicious next time...

cloudedguardian

cloudedguardian #7 · Nov 25th, 2012 · · ·

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Well you're obviously a new reader! So, Nice to meet'cha.
As for being dumb- It's crack. That's the whole point. It was meant to be short, cute, and stupid, so it seems that my mission was accomplished. If it made you grin, I did my job. Yay for me.
And since you're curious, by all means, go read my pet project Ascension.
As earlier stated, Anvilicious was simply crack and little else. Ascension on the other hand, is a serious work that I've been happily writing since I joined. I hear it's pretty good It's made featured more than a couple times so it can't be too bad, right?