I commissioned sometime ago a reading for the the first chapter of Tales from the Dark Side of the Mirror, read by Emogak.
And it's finally here.
I hope you enjoy it!
I commissioned sometime ago a reading for the the first chapter of Tales from the Dark Side of the Mirror, read by Emogak.
And it's finally here.
I hope you enjoy it!
We have art for the first chapter from Wolfram-And-Hart
The was included into the chapter.
Genres
Slice of Life: The story tries to explain how the character we know and love some much live in the absence of Celestia.
Alternate Universe: In this world Celestia is dead, Equestria is ruled by her “successor” Sunbeam Sparkle, the self proclaimed Phoenix Empress the pragmatic and sometimes cruel alicorn.
Adventure: The is a super hero, eventually there will be some of this…. I hope.
Rating
Teen… with lots of hormones.
There are not many fanfic reviewer, and most of the ones there are review the stories from a personal point of view. To give them thumbs up or thumbs down.
I'm trying to make a "Technical" review, not based in what I like or disliked of the story, but in elements that each story has but turns on or off each reader.
I'm reviewing 3 aspects of the story:
Narrative: The description of places,events and character, and how effectively they bound with the reader.
Well today was busy, so I only had the chance to read a couple of short stories, and the beginning of a long one.
-- Celestia's Teeth by Abalidoth --
Story Synopsis: Celestia feels that the palace staff are over protecting her. To the point that they assign a servant to clean her teeth. But she decides to do something about it.
Good Execution: Giving Celestia a Fun Loving and Pranking spirit without really making it a troll is no easy feat.
Stupid Queries, they delay a lot, that's why I read so many fics today.
Also i'm trying to see what it's the best format for this:
--The Sweetie Chronicles: Fragments by Wanderer D--
A freak magical accident has sent Sweetie Bell into a journey to recover back the fragments of Twilight Sparkle soul, that are scattered into different dimensions and different pony worlds.
Current Chapter:
Backwards Through the mirror Part 2
Well I need to exercise my writing and my communication. One of the things I often do, is reading fanfics, and since there are a lot of you who don't like
--Steadfast Sky--
This story is about the Celestia, Luna and Discord, as the previous bearers of the elements of Harmony, an adventure, slice of life. Story with many interactions between the three most powerful creatures in equestria, before their downfall.