I've put Queen Nightmare Moon, Taken, & The Long Flight on Cancelled for now as the likelihood of them getting updated (before I'm done with the other stories) is very slim.
I've put Queen Nightmare Moon, Taken, & The Long Flight on Cancelled for now as the likelihood of them getting updated (before I'm done with the other stories) is very slim.
...and finally publish.
Chapter 14 of Pearl's Travels 2: Canterlot is up.
It's the first chapter that wasn't half-finished on drive, so let me know if you spot anything which needs more editing.
Reading back through the first story and what was published from this one, I see so much in the way of spelling and grammar which could be fixed up... let's not even start on the fixes I could throw at the plot if I were to do a full rewrite.
So I'm having a couple of paths the story can branch out to from the events laid out in Chapter 13.
I've got both a 'good' and 'bad' path written out, and both seem equally possible at this point.
I'm writing out the events following for both, seeing which way works out better, but I did say in a previous blog post that progress would be slow.
Right now I'm leaning toward the 'good' path but the 'bad' path would open the story up to more engaging scenes.