Before the Night Sequel

So, as the title to this post implies, there is a sequel to Before the Night. I have the first chapter written out and I’m currently editing it and checking for typos and other various mistakes. The working title is Dawn of a New Age, and will probably go down a darker path than Before the Night. Stay tuned for when that
drops.

Comments

[Nugget27]

for now though, if you have any questions in regards to Before the Night, you can ask them here. If you want me to make a seperate story which will be a one shot, which would have been another way for me to end Before the Night, lemme know. Because I was originally going to actually have Bald Ostrich killed.

[hmaf43]

I think the ending is kind of rushed. Things about Chysalis is basically exposition, and I don't see anything psychopath-feeling about Starlight that were mentioned in the previous chapter.

The thing you definitely should add is protaganist's interaction with Chysalis, just like what you had done with Blaze.

And make Starlight's thing longer. There's alot potential in'people from the future gawking at people from the past', that's basically a quater of Doctor Who's whole plot.(Scifi, Plot, and drama make it whole)

[RandomCommentor]

Maybe the title should be After the Night? Or maybe Before the Dawn.