Still seeking help with chapter 7 · 2:29am January 7th
Posting this again because some might have missed my previous post since I posted it in the middle of the holidays.
The next chapter is more or less done. But now it is the time when I need help editing it but also I still feel that some details are missing in the chapter which I can't really put my finger on. So even if you don't want/can't edit I would appreciate anyone who could give it a read-over and tell me if there are any specific sections you think I should expand upon.
This one is shorter than the previous ones but the next one will be a fairly large one so that should make up for it.
So if are interested in helping me edit please PM me and I will send a google doc link with the chapter.
Anyway hope, everypony had enjoyable holidays.
I wouldn't mind giving it a look