Rewriting early chapters

Hey guys, I finally got a new chapter out. YIPPIE! Yes! I know. Hooray! Now, I'm gonna tell you that new chapters are gonna be put on hold for a minute. FOR GOOD REASON!

I recently put out a thread post for someone to go through and proofread my story "From Beyond the Veil." And aburi answered and let's say he had some eye-opening words. To make a long story short, he pointed out a lot of things that made the first pretty much five chapters both heavy-handed with some things and uninteresting while other things were downright stupid, And I agree with them. So, that being said, Over the course of the coming weeks, I'm going to be rewriting/revising the first five chapters of "From Beyond the Veil." I feel as though they need it. And Aburi said he'd be willing to help out in proofreading when and if he is available. (god bless him.)

So In short, new chapters on hold, revisions in progress, and we got a certified giga chad helping me out with proofreading when he can. All in all, good stuff.