Friendship is Worth It Update - New Chapters and a Word about Grammar! · 2:25pm May 1st
Hello again, everyone!
Firstly, new chapters for Spring Surprises and The Great Crusade were recently released into the wild! I hope you enjoy them and I welcome your comments! Seriously, they are food for writers! Just remember to use common sense and don't be a jerk.
Spring Surprises Chapter 17 - Griffon the Reality Check
- After meeting the full Griffon roster, the Rainbooms and CMCs figure out their moves, Gilda chats with her flock, and The Wrecker shuts a fool up.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/517470/18/spring-surprises/chapter-17-griffon-the-reality-check
The Great Crusade Chapter #7 - Our Kin Part 1: The Honest Apple
- After taking stock of their list, the CMCs spend quality time with their sisters. Apple Bloom and Applejack, in particular, spend their time working as only Apples can.
Now, let me tell you something about English grammar: it has a metric ton of rules and following many of them can really help your writing. Unfortunately, I, a man with an Associates in Creative Writing, did not recall certain rules when I was writing the previous chapters for the current stories! Don't get me started on the other finished tales!
Talk about embarrassing!
Thankfully, a certain wandering proofreader/retired fanfic writer has been pointing out my grammatical errors in a way that's genuinely helpful.
A big thank you to SciSetShimmerEvan for the help! I'll get the errors resolved, but this will take me time. I mean, I've been making those errors from the start of this project!
At the very least, expect the newly posted chapters and future ones to not be such a grammatical mess.
I know it'll take you time but I appreciate the mention at least.