I need opinions here... · 12:55am Jan 10th, 2013
Well... I'm not sure. I want to continue writing this story. I do. But, I keep thinking that I can't do it. Iunno. I think I went in over my head by trying to start my writing 'career' here with a multi-chapter story. So, I want your opinion here. Should I keep writing that Alliance story, or should I put it on hiatus and try to focus on writing one-shots instead, so as to get a bit more used to this thing. Either way, I'm still going to keep writing, but I'm not sure what I want to work on right now...
Eh, well if you're really concerned about doing it justice, then do some one-shots for practice. Otherwise everyone's first fic is your "lamb to the slaughter" as I like to say. Every reader will always go into it, and will learn they've made a lot of mistakes. Then they pick up the pieces, and start on something else to improve. That's what I did. I had an old HiE called "Fate Game" (it's still around some other sites probably), that was a huge bomb but I learned so much from it! Every failure I had with this, I learned from and Black Box benefited. You could just finish this if it's not that long but one-shots are a good idea.
I think you should keep writing chapters. What I read of your story so far was good except for a couple (easily fixed) spelling errors.
A writing career means you will be making a living by writing. If you don't have very good writing skills, then the best way to learn is by writing stuff you don't intend on publishing first, IE: fanfiction. This is how I started anyway and am currently writing my first book while continuing writing fanfictions on this site. Keep at the writing. It will become easier and unlock hidden talent in time.
695146 ... Couple of things.
1: 'Career'. I meant it in that my writing... well, writing career. Not really a profession. Not really making a living off of it.
2: That doesn't answer my question...
695161 yea, keep writing, you can only get better in time.
695172 ...Writing what? The story, or practice with one-shots?
695188 the story. One shots get kind of redundant after a while.
695196 Che.... Hm...