Chapter Five Coming Soon · 7:47am Jan 29th, 2013
Hi Everybody
I thought I should let you all know I'm working on "Rainbow Dash Gets a D -" chapter 5. It should be up out soon. Also I'm looking for an editor , I'm not going to be very picky just someone that can help here and there. Grammar is a huge challage for me and I want someone to look over it before I post it. If intersted please comment below or send me a message which whatever is easier for you.
Anyways heres a sneak peak.
One Week Later
The rainbow filly stared hopelessly at the textbook. Trying her best to understand and sucking on all the new information. However no matter how hard she tried she wasn’t getting it. After the fight with Jade at the library, she completely stopped talking to Rainbow at school. Even when she attempted to apologized, resulting with Jade giving her to the cold shoulder and ignoring her much more.
Now force to study by herself without any help. Rainbow continuing to look intently at the book, doing what to figure out she is reading. She kept rereading the same sentence or paragraph when she didn’t quite get it the first time. But still she is reaching her fear in failing and being held back a grade. Out of frustration she banged to her head against the desk recurring this for the tenth-hundred time or so.
Let me know you think and have a nice day. =)