New Riff on something disturbingly evil

Hey guys, Mule here. So, I'm sitting on my bed, thinking about what to write, when I get a message from our old friend Draklox. He asks me if I can riff on something that's called Derpy's Finest Hour, I say 'Sure, I'll give it a look over.' How bad can it be right? ... IT'S THE.WORST.POSSIBLE.F@(KING. THING!

I've riffed some bad stuff, anyone who's read some of my riffs for MPPT3K and on this blog knows I've done some really bad riffs. But this... This story is just fricken horrible! It's written by some bastard by the name of headless_rainbow, who also wrote Spikey Wikey and Luna's Lunacy, both of which are in the same ilk as this story.

It's an obvious troll fic, but it's one of the ones that will get under almost everyone's skin after a while. Espeically when it starts getting boring! If you want to read the original(may Luna has mercy on your soul) unriffed version it's right here.

The riff is in this link. Enjoy.

Comments

[MetaKnight145]

Eh, gore doesn't affect me. I might actually like it.
derpy.ponychan.net/chan/files/src/135990214196.png
Only one way to find out.

[MetaKnight145]

Well...I can't say it is poorly written. Grammar spelling and such are top notch. Good troll fic too, in terms of what a troll fic's goal is. I won't down vote anything simply because of the material but I won't fave it either because of the material.

[Muleicous]

838215 Eh, the grammar and spelling you use some work in my opinion. But yeah, successful troll fic is successful. Not my cup of tea though.