Apple of My Eye update notice · 10:23pm Feb 22nd, 2013
Okay, this is for anyone that is watching me, i suppose, because i doubt anyone not getting updates about me will ever take the time to try and look for me on here.
Dear Princess Celestia,
Today i learned that you shouldn't try and write a chapter that you're uncomfortable with. Not only does it bug you as a writer, but it also bugs the readers.
I also learned that i should not try writing ANYTHING, except maybe Meta pieces, on three hours of sleep for a two day period.
I also learned that some idea that are great for writing something like a humanized clopfic, are NOT OKAY to use in a story meant to be random and funny. They just don't mesh well...
Your Faithful Student,
me
After some thought, and reader feedback i've decided that chapter 13, Anna Peeling Apple In Cider, will be rewritten and posted again. Both versions will still be up, but now readers will have a choice between which version they want to read and take as canon for this fic (gods that's an oxymoron...) Anyway, they will now be designated by NSFW tags for the first version, and SFW for the better version. The other reason i'm going to make a second version of this chapter is this.
While i can TOTALLY see Fluttershy as having this dark, hidden side to her, it's just no fun to spell it out. And while i was very pleased with how the characters developed emotionally in the chapter, i didn't feel like it wasn't as organic as it could have been......
besides, this gives me a chance to plug in some more humor than originally.
speaking of humor, chapter 14 will focus on Pinkie Pie...... so prepare for much fourth wall shenanigans, cannon fire, and bizarre trains of thought that just might read like a person on drugs trying to explain the color blue to another person who is also on drugs... and they're both riding horseback...
yeah......... it'll probably be just as screwed up as you think.
wish me luck. I might need it..
good luck
Iv loved reading this so far, its funny and creative. But do yourself a favour.... Get some sleep XD
Keep up the good work!
Oh and for the record, Fluttershy's 'darkside' was a rather... Creative to say least. Some people just dont appreciate creativity as much as others...