New land, New customs, New life...New Love?

Im stuck. i need ideas for another chapter. if u can't think of any, i may have to put the fic on hiatus. sorry.

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[juanpablobro2point0]

ah shit... i better think of an idea

[Lighting Ace]

Well, what about you show us a little more about Connor and Trixie, how that turn up in the end?
And how things with Twilight and Night have being doing?
And finally, something I was wondering, how will Rarity will introduce him to her parents, same with Applejack, Dash, and Spitfire.

Also Celestia didn't disguise herself, what would it be if some photographer took a picture of them…Oh I don't know kissing or holding hands? That certainly could bring attention to the press

[StormHoof32]

1001445 I was looking for more of a antagonist idea. something to add some action to the story. Like addition of a major villian or something. I need something so thrilling, that Alan will have to go outside of his comfort zone to take down and I want everything he holds dear to be at stake.

[Lighting Ace]

1001551
Oh that is easy, Chrysalis could fill that roll, but you can also, do this, some guards or captains don't like Alan and want him gone so they start plotting how to destroy him. Mayor from different cities can do that to.

There is the idea of dragons, minotaurus or other species, that hate him, for one or another reason and want him out of the way.

And this could be a little weak but, perhaps a cult dedicated to the princesses and with the believe that they must they ancestor have share a moment of intimacy and there for they are the only ones with the right of be with them think Alan has stain their holy symbol and is a demon that has brainwash the princesses and its plotting to conquer Equestria, so its there objective to destroy him before its to late

[StormHoof32]

1001845 ...You raise some valid points. legit too. keep an eye out for a new chapter. Ill hopefully have a new chapter up within the next three days.

[Lighting Ace]

1002262
Glad I could help, sorry for the grammar errors

[StormHoof32]

1002269 It's all good. btw, if you want to read a really good fic, read falling from the sky, by RD-loves-RA. I'm just about to finish reading it. and its intense, and romantic and awesome. take a look, its a long one though. 122,000 words. so enjoy!

[Lighting Ace]

1002312
Ok thanks, I will check it out, latter, thanks, and if you like humans being adopted I recommend you "Tales of Prince Onyx" I think you will love it, I talk with the creator and is a very nice guy and listen to recommendations and give suggestion, I think he could give you some ideas, for your story

[StormHoof32]

1002320 I'll be sure to take a look. So, you working on anything at the moment?

[Lighting Ace]

1002324
A couple of stories but I couldn't public anything yet, I still have to finish some details and then pass it to english. But as soon as it ready I think i will publish it.

[StormHoof32]

1002334 sounds cool. I might do a one-shot sometime today. I'm hoping it will at least reach 2,000 or 3000 words total. I'm not sure. i have to think on it. haha, god I hate writers block. it sucks like no other.

[Lighting Ace]

1002341
I hear you mean, writer block its a complete bitch sometimes

[StormHoof32]

1002343 Gotta admit though, I had a good run for a while. I think I might have added a little to much clop as a filler though, and not enough storyline. That's something I still have a problem with. I actually plan on going to college while in the army, for literature and writing. I plan on being an author and I want to get a lot better at my writing and story telling ability.

[Lighting Ace]

1002365
That is a great dream, je what little world, the story that I'm working has some military ambient. And by that I mean that the human (yeah one of those) is training to join the royal guard

[StormHoof32]

1002499 hey new chapter up. Enjoy the new villain OC!!! something i just came up with! haha.