No Rest for the Wicked (Rainbow Dash Cover - Video) · 11:39pm Jul 10th, 2013
Honest, brutal opinions bout' my singing, please :).
Well I was walkin’ down the street,
To grab a bite to eat,
And saw this pretty little thing watchin’ me.
She said I never seen a mare,
Who ever looked so fine and rare,
Could you use a little company?
At first she treated me alright,
She made my evening nice,
Then she pulled out a dagger just for me,
But on that freak night she learned,
That Death can’t die,
And she was mine for eternity.
Cus now there ain't no rest for the wicked,
The order don't cut it for me,
I've got disease to flay!
I've got business to pay!
There ain't no sin that goes for free.
And no I can't slow down,
I can't hold back,
And you know?
I never would.
For there ain't no rest for the wicked,
Til I shed my last soul for good!"
She twirled her scythe, winking towards the Lich Queen.
So Twili don't you see,
How much this means to me,
I've gotta keep with the times as they come.
Don’t matter how many saints,
That still don't kill the stank,
That’s this ghoul’s special form of fun.
And they might think they're slick,
dirty deeds in the thick,
They don't know how good these eyes can see.
And while they might evade the livin',
I don't know who they’re kiddin,
Cus there's no escape from me.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Cus there ain't no rest for the wicked,
The order don't cut it for me,
I've got disease to flay!
I've got my mouth to feed!
There ain't no sin that goes for free.
And no I can't slow down,
I can't hold back,
And you know?
I never would.
And there will be no rest for the wicked,
Til the clock stops tickin' for good!"
Well, I can't say anything was bad about this at all. The singing was fine (could always be better) and the lyrics were really good. But the thing that took me off guard was the mic effect you used. It kind of made it sketchy because it was so . . . echo-y. But besides that, I think this was rather nice.
Careful on the high-note vibratos you have; they can be a little flat.
Once I get home in a few weeks, I think I might try my hand at this. (A cover of a cover?)
Oh, and I am fairly sure there is an entire verse that you wrote on here, but you didn't actually say.
And more on the high notes in general, you seem to be a tad flat on them. Not exactly a hard thing to fix at all. Just keep on practicing
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Next chapter of Hearth's Warming Nightmare :). Provided I don't think it's too crappy.
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Na you're good lol. Though I appreciate the help from everyone, editing is going smoothly for myself.
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Sounds good to me :).
I'm not trying to be mean or anything but I can't tell if a girl is singing.
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Actually, that's a good thing. I was trying my hand at singing like a girl since well... the person singing it in the fic is a girl.
honest opinion about your singing?
it's better than mine.
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That's cus there aren't any unposted ones at the moment :P. I appreciate the help for everyone, but I've found my editing skills are getting up to par. Don't wanna waste anyone's time when it ain't needed. Still, I could send you a pm if you want to look over a new chap.
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It's the thought that counts: don't feel guilty :P. Though if you want to help I can certainly pm you when there's an unfinished chapter up so you can look over it.