Feedback, please? DX

Hello there Followers!

Thank you for reading my stories and can't help it i am curious of what you think of them, one weakness i know with out mentioning it, grammar, but other things, the speed of the story, setup, also some ideas, twists you think could be used.

I'm mainly asking about my newer story here but thoughts for Spero are equalaly welcome as i will continue that story too, but might do rewrite, that to be decided yet.

Zeee Ice signing off now~