Chapter 28 · 3:24am Jan 31st, 2014
Okay, I finally finished the first draft of chapter 28. It's a bit shorter than usual, but the next logical stopping point for the story is too far away to cram into this chapter.
If anybody is willing to take a shot at proofreading it, let me know and I'll send you the link. I'd like to get as much feedback as I can.
And now, this:
Now is not the time, Twilight.
I'm willing to take a shot at proofreading for you again. I won't be able to look at it until after work tomorrow, so I hope that isn't a problem.
Cheers.
Dat pic. Out of context is best context.
1778734 Indeed.
Looks like Twi eats RD's wing.
Or... wait a minute. I'll look a little bit closer...
Uh... okay.
(tail eating is now canon)
Twi what are you doing?
just.:. Relax.
okay...
Ok no