Would you read this?

When Zecora leaves her home to Pinkie for the week, Pinkie finds herself able to see into Zecora's cauldron what others cannot. She mixes the potions, spending more and more precious time at the Zebra's home. Eventually, Pinkie begins to become more insane and less social each day.
One gloomy day, Pinkie's friends come and see her. The potion room is dark except for the glow of the mixture that pinkie had peered into. When the brew was finished, Pinkie realizes what she had driven herself into when everything goes wrong...

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Comments

[Broadway Sweetie Belle]

Shockwave– Hmm. Your premise sounds mysterious, and it doesn't give away what she had been doing. It gets the audience curious, which is a defining factor to whither they'll read it or not. I would say go for it.

[Lunnana]

1792506 thanks!