Reading is Magic #9 · 11:57pm Mar 2nd, 2014
Hello Bronies! 2nd post for the Massive March Marathon! This time I'm reviewing Victory Apple by Maxima Mea Culpa. Before I give the description, I want to say this. Applejack is best pony.
Amnesia leads Applejack to becoming the sheriff and protector of a small settlement in Western Equestria. When her friends come to jog her memory, though, they discover a distrustful replacement for their friend, whose only desire is to protect the town that has adopted her. Only by saving the town from the encroaching threat of three unicorn bandits can the five convince their old friend to trust them again.
Yikes. That was a sad description. You have to say yes to that. Now then. questions are scattered everywhere for me. One of them is how did Applejack so easily remember everything with a simple conversation. Now I see many ways it could have happened and could make this story somewhat longer. Applejack could have gotten into a fight, Applejack winning, but passes out. Good time to take AJ to Celestia and everything will smooth out there. I have many other ways it could end, but this would take all month. Also, it would be very unlikely that Applejack would run off without anyone to help her. But then again, she can be very stubborn. So yeah. I can see why she went alone. One more, why would she be mean to ponies, Twilight and Rarity, for being unicorns. Now she had a brawl with other unicorns, the same ones that gave her amnesia, but this is Equestria. It is common down here, but in Equestria you have many ponies living inn harmony. I guess she is being a bit of her self, with her being stubborn about it, so I can see how that would happen.
Now to rate! I think with everything there to add and subtract the score. Yes people, I actually use logic!* It deserves a good 8! It had a few questions, it was a good read, and it was really a great story!
Hope you guys are enjoying the marathon! I might be able to end it of with a bang! This is Little Wood, signing out!
Story: Victory Apple
Author: Maxima Mea Culpa
*I'm not known to use logic in real life.
